I just finished watching the Titanic movie and was inspired to write this poem about what Rose is feeling after Jack dies.
A raw, gaping hole is my heart
I thought you said we'd never be apart
The fates tore you from me
Our love was cursed from the start you see
Many days I wonder why
Why it was you who had to die
I think of the life we could have had
But that though makes me mad
We were young and in love
But sadly your soul had to go above
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