Hello. I wanted to try something out. I have a lot of stories currently in production, but i have ahard time actually finishing any of them. Most of the time they get stuck in this sort of halway point. the stroy is all done and planned out, but it's not fleshed out completely. This story i have wanted to put out for a while, and with the release of Young Justice: Outsiders, i wanted to pudlish it.
For now i will leave it in it's skeleton state, but there is a chance i will come back and flesh it out. I jsut wanted to put this out there and see if others can follow along with my story planning. and since i have quite a few stories that are completed but in this format, i wanted to see if people would still enjoy it.
Anyway, long explanation out of the way, on with the story skeleton.
I do not own Young Justice.
Thanksgiving Day Episode
Superboy watches as the other superman clone is put back into his pod
Guardian says he didn't know about this room
and soon they will see what is behind the door 514
Superboy asks what is inside it
Guardian says subject 514A, designation 'Project B'
Superboy says he will give them a hand
they find a large door
he pries the door open
lights come on
Superboy stares at another dark haired boy in a pod
Superboy asks who he is
Guardian says he isn't sure
Superboy walks up to the control panel
he opens the pod
Superboy walks up to the boy
says hello
the dark haired boy opens his eyes
he looks around
asks where he is
Superboy says Cadmus genetics labs
the boy asks what he is doing here
Superboy says he doesn't know
but he knows people who can help
he helps the boy out of the pod
Guardian says he will find the boy clothes other than the jumpsuit
Superboy thanks Guardian
the boy thanks superboy
Superboy says his name is Conner
boy says that is a good name
Superboy asks the boy what his name is
boy says he is Batman
at least an adolescent clone of him
Superboy asks if the Genomorphs told him that
he guesses that makes him Batboy
Batboy says he guesses it does
Superboy says he doesn't know his face
Batboy raises an eyebrow
Superboy says he is a genomorph clone of superman
he looks like a teenage version of superman
Batboy says oh
says he doesn't know who Batman is and he is a clone
Superboy says maybe Batman will reveal who he is
after all everyone is going to be able to match the faces
Batboy says that may be true
but what if Batman decided he is useless
Superboy tells him not to worry
he may be a clone but he is still a living being
Batboy thanks him
Guardian comes back and says this was all he found
there is a black 3/4 shirt
black cargo pant
black combat boots
Batboy says they will do
Superboy says he will wait outside
then they will go see his friends
Batboy and Superboy are standing in a clearing at the base of Mount Justice
Batboy asks what they are doing here
Superboy says Batboy doesn't have an access code yet
and he can't authorize him
so they have to wait out here
the front door opens
Robin says he has got to see this
he stops when he sees Batboy
he goes whoa
Kid asks how accurate
he stops and says dead on
Artemis walks up and says so that's what Batman looks like under the cowl
Robin says if you take of a bunch of years
Robin walks up to Batboy and holds out his hand
Robin introduces himself
Batboy introduces himself
the rest of the team approaches
Batboy says he is a clone of Batman
Batman says let's prove that
the team parts and Batman and Batboy stare at each other
Batman says let's go inside
they walk in
Batman authorizes Batboy and adds him to the system when they enter Mount Justice
they get to the training room
Conner asks what the decision is
Batman turns and says no tests are needed
he takes his cowl off
Artemis goes no way
Batman is Bruce Wayne
Bruce Wayne is Batman
Artemis smirks and looks at Robin
says that makes him Richard Greyson
Dick takes his sunglasses off and says his friends call him Dick
Wally says at least he doesn't have to keep that a secret from the team
Artemis yells that he knew
Bruce says he told him not to tell
Bruce walks up to Batboy
tells him he understands that being created wasn't his choice
but now he bares his face
so he has a choice to make
Batboy says he wants to help
Bruce nods
tells him it's not going to be easy
Batboy says he wasn't expecting it to be
Dick asks if he is coming home with them
Bruce says of course
he is a bat after all
Dick yells yes
finally he has a sibling
Bruce raises an eyebrow
Dick asks what
Says siblings are awesome
Batboy asks if he is always like this
everyone goes yes
Batboy chuckles
Wally says Batboy needs a name
M'gann wonders what name would fit him
Looks at Batman
says other tha the obvious
Bruce offers Tyler as a suggestion
Batboy says he likes it
Bruce says Tyler Wayne
its only fitting that he has his name
the resemblance can't be anything but blood
Dick says he couldn't agree more
he punches Tyler's shoulder
tells him welcome to the family
all of them
Bruce says he will see if Batboy is prepared to join the team
until then, they had places to be
Dick tell Tyler he is going to love the manor
and maybe they can surprise Alfred
Bruce says he doubts that
Tyler asks who Alfred is
Bruce says a friend
Tyler says he is looking forward to meeting him
So, what do you think of this style?
i know it is extremely short and a quick read, but with how my mind works i see it as a full chapter, minus the scenic pan-overs. And since i have all of the chapters written out in this format, i can have the entire story up in less than a week. maybe two depending on how much editing it needs and if i make any changes.
Let me know what you think of both the story and the presentation style. i know it's different and very bare, but this is essentially what would have been in the entire chapter anyway. It just gets to the point faster.
