By: kagomekogasdreamdate
A/N: Hello. This fic. is about a young human and her travels. And the many friends and foes that she meets along the way. I've only written the prologue because I want to know if this interests anyone and if it is good enough to continue on. Please read and review. I would appreciate this deeply. May Tyr guide your steps!
Friend or Foe
Prologue:
The sun was rising as I left the town of Belbamora. I looked back on Belbamora and smiled. I was leaving a town that had bored me for many years. I had come because it was in need of assistances in fighting against its neighboring town. But its dull buildings and weak structures were built over cursed land that would crumble if any intense attack was forced upon it. I pulled my cloak's hood up and looked away from Belbamora. I slowly walked passed an old location marker. It read: North to Belbamora, South to Kelna, East to Delbamora, and West to Apoca. I was headed to Delbamora, the sister town of Belbamora. I looked east and took a deep breath. As I set east, I watched the sun slowly pass over me. My long trek was just beginning. I traveled through many difficult obstacles, but as I walked close to the snowy mountains, I could hear a faint noise. I could tell it was a water fall from the faint rush of water and the fresh smell of mist in the air. I set up camp at the water fall. Sipping from the falls, I had an eerie feeling as if someone was watching me.
"Stupid birds..." I didn't want this 'person' to know I knew he was here.
I thought for a moment and decided to take a refreshing bath in the falls. I searched for a group of rocks nearby and watched the camp as I removed my clothing. As I slowly walked into the water, I squinted, for it felt like thousands of knives plunging into my skin. I pulled out my braid as I watched my surroundings. My long blonde hair fell into the water as the ribbon left it. I dove into the water felling the cold rush of water on my pale skin. When I swam to the surface, I heard a splash and rushed to the shore and watched the waters.
"Hello? Show yourself, I know someone is there!" I pulled my sword into the water and waited for any sign of movement. After waiting a minute, I put my sword down and sighed. I had been so paranoid that I had jumped to conclusions.
"It was probably just a rock." I swam back to the middle of the fall and washed my hair.
I began to hum to the tune of my favorite song. I pulled my hand out from the water and looked at the pale wrinkled hand. I had been in the water to long. I looked up at the water falling from the rocks above when I felt fingers run through my hair. I quickly turned around.
A/N: I'm not sure if the way I'm writing is appealing to you and many others. Please review and give me as much advise as possible. Anyway, does this appeal to you so far? Remember to R&R!!