This story is my friend Sarah's story and sorry if it looks a bit messed up but still, REVIEW PLEASE!
Narrator: Once upon a time there were retards named Mario, Peach, Daisy, and Luigi…..
Peach: Hey Mario! Want to hang with me and daisy after school tonight at the movies?
Mario: To do what? And can Luigi come too?
Peach: Hang out, watch a scary movie…and duh….Daisy…Luigi. You know…..love.
Daisy: That's not true! : P
Peach: *cough* *cough*
Mario: Hey Luigi! Wanna come hang tonight with daisy and peach?
Luigi: Ummm….Sure?
Daisy and Peach: *Giggles* Hehe will see you guys later!
Mario and Luigi: Okay! Tonight at….7:00?
Peach: okay ;)
Narrator: they all go home and Daisy comes to Peaches house to get ready…..
Daisy: I will straighten your hair if you curl mine!
Peach: okay! *curls hair for 15 min*
Daisy: *straightens hair for 15 min*
Daisy and Peach: MAKE UP TIME!
Narrator: They finish makeup and hair and get their cute shorts and long sleeve tops on of course pink and orange.
Peach: I think they're here!
Daisy: OMG! HOLY CRAP!
Mario: hey girls!
Luigi: hey daisy
Daisy: hey Luigi
Mario: you girls ready to go?
Peach and Daisy: YES!
Narrator: they arrive at the movies to see for a paranormal Activity 3…. Peach beside Mario and daisy and daisy beside Luigi next to Peach… They all are scared and hold on to the boys. Luigi asks to take daisy home after the movie…and he does, then Mario takes Peach home a while later…
Daisy: I had a great night with you Luigi. 3
Luigi: me too daisy…. I hope we can do this another time.
Daisy: like a date?
Luigi: Our second date.
Daisy: *blushes* *gets closer*
Luigi: * gets closer*
Luigi and Daisy: *KISSES! KISSES!*
Daisy: night talk to you tomarrow!
Luigi: okay! 3
Narrator: Later when Mario arrives at peaches house….
Mario: that was fun!
Peach: YEA IT WAS!
Mario: wanna do this again sometime like as another date?
Peach: Date?
Mario: yea date 3
Peach: Of course!
Peach and Mario: *get closer…kisses*
Peach: good night Mario!
Mario: night Peach! 3
Ok so to me it was an 'ok' type story but I wanna know what you guys think! REVIEW PLEASE!