A/N Hey this is my second attempt to write a fan fic (I deleted my first it was horrible). Anyways I hope this one is better. I would really appreciate any tips that anyone has to give me. OK on with the story!
The big time rush boys were sitting at the table eating breakfast.
"MMMM your mom makes the best chocolate pancakes!" Logan said as he took another bite
"Yeah" Carlos and James chirp in. "Oh well thank you boys." Mrs. Knight said as she walked into the kitchen.
"Let's go to the park after breakfast!" Kendall randomly blurted out.
"YAY Park!" Carlos jumped up and yelled. "Why do you want to go to the park?" Logan asked. "I don't know, it's just we haven't been there in a while and I'm bored." Kendall replied. The others just nodded their head. After breakfast the boys were walking to the park. They talked about the new song Gustavo was having them rehears. Then out of the blue Carlos yelled "DOG!" and started running towards it. The other had to follow to make sure he didn't get in trouble. They finally caught up to him to see him petting the dog.
"Umm Carlos I'm not so sure that's a good idea. Logan said. He might have rabies and bite you."
"HAHA a sweet old dog wouldn't bite me." Carlos laughed.
Then the dog started growling and showed its teeth. "Carlos back up slowly." Logan told him.
But Carlos was too scared to even move. The dog started barking rapidly and Carlos fell on his back and that's when it happened. The dog lunged for Carlo but James leaped in front of Carlos and got bit in the arm instead of Carlos. Then the dog went back for seconds and bit him in leg before Kendall could grab the dog's collar and pull him off James.
"James!" Logan yelled as he ran to James' side. "Are you okay did he break the skin." Before he noticed all the blood on James arm and leg. All Logan could do was just stare at James arm and leg. Then Carlos ran over to help James up and he couldn't help notice James wince at the pain in his leg.
Kendall was still holding the dog. He didn't know what to do with it. Just then the dog slipped out of its collar and ran away. Logan finally got up and helped Carlos with James. It was then they finally noticed they were in a forested area and didn't know the way out.
A/N ok, ok. I know it was short and I'm sorry but it looked like a good place to stop. OK so how was it? Was it horrible? So bad u had to stop reading it? Should I never write again? I would love to have reviews. I take criticism well so don't hold back but be a little easy because it's technically my first fan fic. THX for reading! :D
