hello people of the internet this is my first story so I'm excited if you do have a negative comment i don't care if you say it and if you don't like it don't read alright read.
It was a normal day in death City Nevada there was a nice breeze, Maka Albarn once again ran out of her house laughing as her drunk father screamed at her for getting back home around midnight "I don't care if he doesn't listen neither will I" Maka said to herself, Her mother Kami wasn't around because last month both girls found out about Spirit's cheating ways. Let's say her mother handled it no where near lightly from her eyes both her parents forgot she as even their was upset because when she started to throw things at her, he tried to protect the slut he was in bed with. Maka jumped over the fence to meet her best friend "Sup Black Star,"Black Star turned around "Sup Maka," they high fived Maka sat down on a junk couch "pass me a beer would ya?" Kidd threw a beer to Maka "did your dad catch you last night?" Kidd asked "hell ya he almost murdered my ass right then and there and he was drunk." Maka said a little angry "Any ways where's Liz and Patty?" Maka asked "what else do they're doing?" Kidd asked "robbing" Maka answered Kidd nodded his head. Maka was part of a group who love robbing people and sometimes killing but they mostly took advantage to them. "what bout Tsubaki?" Maka was almost done with her beer "Date with a rich dude." Black Star sneered handing Maka another beer "ooo I think someone is jealous," Maka teased "Shut up and I'm not jealous she's going to rob him anyways." Black Star answered "Hey Maka we have school tomorrow don't we?" Black Star asked "Shit I forgot about the project I"ll see you guys later Tell Liz and Patty I'll see them at home!" Kidd said running towards his home, "I heard their is going to be a new kid," Maka raised a brow "and why do I care?" Maka asked "I heard he's a thug." black Star said plainly "Should we check him out because how many people are in the group?" Maka asked "there's you, me, Tsubaki, Liz, Patty, Kidd, Brad, Chrona, and your crazy ex Asura so about 9." Maka groaned when he said Asura "I think he still doesn't like Brad," Black Star said "why?" Maka answered "Because you and Brad are dating and let's face it he's starting to stalk you." Black Star started to laugh "Tell he about it where ever I go I always some how running into Asura by quiescence, Man he's creepy." Maka said in a disgusted voice "So are we going to check out the new kid?" Black Star asked excited "What's his name?" Maka asked "ooo right his name is Soul 'Eater' Evans and he doesn't live far." Black Star answered. "alright let's get ready." Maka and Black Star started to get up "Get Ready for what?" they looked back to see Liz and Patty "new kid words on the street say he's a thug so we are going to check it out." Maka answered "Where's Kidd and Tsubaki?" Patty asked "Kidd has to finish a project that's due tomorrow and Tsubaki is on a rich date who's money will be ours soon." Black Star answered "alright good luck Patty and I will wait for Tsubaki." Liz stated "aight." Black Star answered soon the two teens started to run "How old is Soul?" Maka answered "He's my age so a year older than you but we are all in the same grade." Black Star answered in the group of thugs Maka was the baby then it was Patty then Brad so on and so on. They finally reached where this Soul lived a guy came out he had a leather jacket on blue jeans an orange shirt and a head band. Maka noticed his white hair and his red eyes "Is that him?" Maka asked "yup." Black Star answered "wow he's not bad looking." Maka stated Black Star chuckled "Maka remember you have a boyfriend." Black Star said funny "Doesn't mean I can't flirt or have fun." Maka answered "look he's on the move!" Black Star shouted quietly. Next they started to follow Soul who went into an alleyway and leaned against the wall next to a metal door "Why is he at a strip club?" Maka asked "I don't know but to me he seems like he know how to have fun." Black Star said happily Maka rolled his eyes "Any moment now," Soul said to himself soon Maka and Black Star saw a guy with some what of hair that looked spiky he had on a nose strip and just creeped Maka out "Hey Giriko,"Soul said Giriko snapped his head " SOUL w-What are you doing here?!" he asked surprise Maka and Black Star this was getting interesting so they moved up closer to see Soul slam Giriko against the wall "Did you forget you owe me money that I lend you last month?" Soul asked "I-I d-Don't h-have it I swear!" he yelled Soul smirked "Then why you at a strip club?" soul asked "I had to meet someone!" he blurted "So if I check your wallet you won't have any money at all?" soul asked already knowing the answer "I don't so you don't need to check my wallet I'm clean!" he screamed then Maka decided to jump in "Do you mind if I checked?" Soul turned his head and Giriko smirked "Help me he's trying to murder me!" Giriko smirked "fuck" Soul thought to himself "Okay and?" Maka said walking up to them both "Black Star!" Maka called soon the blue head ninja appeared "yes?" he asked "check him" Maka stated Black Star smirked soon Black Star found some thing Soul was confused but still pinned Giriko who looked worried "Maka," Black Star said lightly "what did he have?" Black Star tossed her a wallet and a gun "were you planning on killing me?" Soul asked Giriko "No money my ass." Maka stated "Fuck!" Giriko shouted "why were you lying Giriko that's not cool, Blondie how much does he have?" Maka smirked "over 10 grand." Maka answered "Giriko?" Soul said darkly Giriko swallowed nervously "bye?" he said Maka threw the gun to soul who hurried and shot Giriko "Nice shot." Black Stat commented "bastard owed me 3 grand," Soul said upset "thanks so what are you guys?" Soul asked " you can say we are just like you.' Maka answered "So you aren't going to rat on me?" Soul asked "Hell no dude that was too much fun!" Black Star screamed as Maka giggled "Wait what time is it?!" Maka asked worriedly "almost 11," Soul answered "Shit if I'm late he's going to murder my ass." Maka said "who?" Soul asked "her dad," Black Star answered "so you names are Maka and Black Star cool so when do I see you guys around again?" Soul asked "oh you'll see us again very soon see ya Soul," Maka said soon running off "see ya dude try to to get caught!" Black Star said running off after Maka. "Who the hell did I just meet?" Soul said to himself but soon started to head home, "Black Star hurry if I'm any more late he's going to beat my ass and I know he's drunk and trying to get laid!" Maka screamed "What's the hurry?" Maka ran into someone she looked up "BRAD!" she screamed wrapping her arms around him he chuckled and hugged her back then kissed her on the forehead "Maka stop worrying bout your dad." Maka narrowed her eye brows "you said that yesterday night and he almost beated my ass because you wanted to jerk!" Maka shouted "Whoa Maka you gave him a hand job!" Black Star shouted at the top of his lungs "NO I-I mean like okay we are going out but god no I'm not like that and you of all people know that!" Maka sneered "I wouldn't mind if she-" Brad was cut off by Black Star "I swear you make Maka do any of that shit I'll murder you myself!" Maka had to hold back Black Star "Dude you're not her dad so take a chill pill." Black Star never really liked Brad and Brad liked messing with Black Star, "Star thanks for walking me home but we both need sleep for tomorrow remember," Maka didn't want to tell Brad about Soul just yet she was getting tired of dating Brad and frankly something about Soul she liked, Black Star smirked and remembered her comment the first time they saw him, "aight Brad I'm still going to kick your ass and you hurt Maka-" Black Star couldn't finish "MAKA AGNUS ALBARN GET YOUR LITTLE ASS IN HERE NOW IT'S FUCKING 3:00 A.M.!" Spirit screamed "I never knew your middle name was Agnus that's funny!" Brad said cracking up until Black Star punched him in the stomach "dude shut up you're terrible, Maka goodnight and MORNING !" Black Star screamed "UGH YOU LITTLE ASSHOLE YOU KNOW I HAVE A HEAD ACH!" Spirit yelled clearly upset. Black Star left "Bye Black Star see you tomorrow at school." Maka waved and went in her house. Tsubaki finally got back from her date and on her way she saw Black Star and from the direction he was coming from he probably dropped off Maka and from his expression he had a fight with Brad, again, Tsubaki sighed but liked the fact that Black Star is like Maka's older brother because she never really had people to talk to Tsubaki, Liz and Patty been on the streets since they were about 6 years old around 8 yeas old the three girls met now most of them were around 15 years old Maka was the baby she was turning 15 soon but she's been on the streets for 10 years from the first time she met Black Star, "Black Star!" Tsubaki called out Black Star looked her way his expression lighten :Liz and Patty told me you and Maka went to spy on this new kid that we'll see tomorrow," Tsubaki said with a smile on her face "I wish she'd just break up with that jackass," Black Star mutter "By Jackass do you mean Brad?" Tsubaki asked Black Star nodded lightly "Black Star be patient she'll realize he's not for her but how did the spying go how does this guy look like?" Tsubaki asked Black Star smirked "Maka thinks he's attractive, and he killed a dud but gave us some cash because well I don't even know why but we got money what bout you?" Tsubaki grinned "Grabbed all that suckers cash while he thought he was going to have the time of his life in the bathroom." Tsubaki giggled "How attractive is this guy?" Tsubaki knew what Black Star would do "You're I don't even know what to say anymore." Black Star started walking "Oh come on Black Star you know I was joking but we have to prepare for tomorrow to meet the new kid," Tsubaki smiled "I'll walk you home," with that the two started to walk talking together happily as ever.
A.N. is it good bad I know I know I put some TsuStar in at the end but the good thing was it was around 2,003 words but next chapter you'll see Soul at the new school and ooo is it too short should I add more things I'm nervous I might do another chapter just because I'm bored alright that's what I'll do and at 1:00 A.M. is SOUL EATER I'm definitely staying up for that see you next chapter and Review plz :)