Chapter 1: Winning and Attacking
A/N: The school is set up exactly like my school. It was easier for me that way to do the setting and story.
It was the end of the season, the Tigers had just won their first state championship match since 1995 and they were all excited as they boarded the charter bus to go home from Albany to Manhattan. Rebecca, the star of the team, had no idea what was about to happen to her later that night.
Most girls were sleepy since it had been a long three day tournament and they played constantly with little rest.
As soon as the coach made sure she had everyone on the bus to head home, Rebecca and the majority of her teammates drifted quickly to sleep.
The bus ride came to an end after about an hour and a half and the coach had to wake up almost all of her team.
As the sleepy state champions got off the bus, they didn't notice the man that was parked in a black pickup truck in the back corner of the parking lot, neither did the coach.
Everyone groggily walked inside after the coach unlocked the doors to the school since it was almost midnight and everyone else had gone home.
Rebecca decided to call her boyfriend and tell him the good news and to come pick her up since her car was at home.
The coach wanted all her girls inside while they called their parents just to be safe.
The girls trickled away one by one as they got into their own cars and their parents cars. But Rebecca and the coach were the only two left.
"Sweetheart, do you have a ride?" Coach Hill asked her.
"My boyfriend is supposed to be on his way to pick me up." she sleepily answered.
"I'll wait for you just to make sure you're okay." her coach responded. "I'm just going to go put my bags in my office."
"Okay. I'm not going anywhere." Rebecca replied.
While the coach was in her office, the man that was in the black pickup truck noticed, and saw Rebecca standing there, an easy target for what he wanted. He got out of the truck and started walking towards the school.
When he was doing this, Rebecca's boyfriend was just turning into the parking lot of the school.
Coach Hill was walking out of her office and through the foyer of the locker room when she heard Rebecca talking. "it must be her boyfriend" she thought. And sent a text message to her husband telling him she was coming home.
She heard the school door open and close and figured they had left. She walked out to see Rebecca's boyfriend's car parked along the side of the building. She thought Rebecca had just left with Danny so she walked over to his truck and he rolled down the window.
"Hey Coach Hill, have you seen Rebecca?" he asked.
"No. Not since I went in my office to put some things away. She was standing in the foyer waiting for you and I heard her talking and thought she was leaving with you." She replied.
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UNIDENTIFIED BLACK TRUCK
FFA PARKING LOT (AROUND THE CORNER FROM THE GYM)
MANHATTAN HIGH SCHOOL
"So Rebecca, you have a boyfriend right?" the man asked her.
"Why is that your business and what do you want with me?" she questioned, desperately wanting to call Coach Hill.
"Because, I think you'd be good for you know… love." he replied.
"No. I don't do that with just anyone. Not even my boyfriend." she replied. "Shit. I just admitted I have a boyfriend now he's gonna hurt me or him." she thought after finishing her sentence.
"Oh boy. Lets get started shall we?" he asked beginning to take her clothes off and lay her down in the seat.
"NO!!! PLEASE NO!!!!" Rebecca started to yell.
"SHUT UP OR I'LL KILL YOU AND DANNY!" he responded.
Rebecca prayed to God he wouldn't kill Danny, but decided not to say anything to stay alive as long as she could. She wanted Coach Hill right now so bad, she almost needed her, no she did need her.
She just quietly laid there while he shoved himself inside of her and she felt horrible that she was letting him do this to her. But he finished in under five minutes, shoved her out of the car and sped off.
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IN FRONT OF THE GYMS BY DANNY'S TRUCK
MANHATTAN HIGH SCHOOL
"Did you just hear someone's tires squeal like someone speeding off?" Coach Hill asked.
"Rebecca!!" Danny replied, and god was he worried. "Get in, I think he was in the FFA lot."
Coach Hill opened the passenger door to Danny's truck, climbs in and doesn't care about her seatbelt. She hopes and prays Rebecca's alright. And she texts her husband telling him she'll be longer than she expected.
Danny speeds off into the FFA lot with his headlights on in case Rebecca was laying on the ground.
As they approach the lot, a lot slower now than they were, Danny's headlights hit something that looked like a body, and he prayed it wasn't dead. It had long blond hair, "Rebecca" he thought.
He stopped the car and just sat there for almost five minutes looking at his girlfriend horrified at what he saw. Her uniform was ruined, her short spandex shorts were laying next to her on the concrete ripped into shreds, and she was barely moving.
"Danny… Danny, are you going to just sit there?" Coach Hill asked him from the passenger side of the truck unable to get out because it locked after they hit twenty miles an hour.
"Oh, god, sorry." he unlocked the truck and swung open the door and rushed over to Rebecca. Coach Hill followed behind him wanting to see Rebecca.
A/N: Review time!! Tell me what you think, should I continue??? (The recgonizable SVU characters don't come until next chapter.) And don't worry Chapter 5 of Concrete Angel will be up soon, sometime this week, it's Thanksgiving so I have no idea when Chapter 2 of this or Chapter 5 of Concrete Angel will be up.