disclaimer-i do not own bleach
A/U- this is my first fanfic so dont laugh but please review and give me tips, i set it out like this as if it was a script
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rukia-Ichiiigoo please dont die, not know i need you
ichigo-rukia dont worry i wont die, besides if i do you can find me in soul socity and the-*cough* and then we can be together for ever
rukia-ichigo please you have a life to live here you dont have to die
ichigo-come on rukia i wont make it, no kidou will heal this *points to hole in chest* the hollow has corrupted it i am a gonna
~flash back~
rukia-yea the hollows over here quick
ichigo-yea i know give me chance this body is is irritating me so bad im going to just leave it here
rukia-ICHIGO get over here there is two of them, ichigo? Ichigo were are you?
ichigo-i am right here rukia *jumps over and slices first hollow inhalf*
rukia-took your time did you not?
ichigo-Hey i am not the one that got us lost getting here so dont start with that 'MIDGET'
*both climb back in bodies*
rukia-WHAT THE HELL DID YOU JUST CALL ME STRAWBERRY?
ichigo-i called you a MIDGET - MIDGET
*creepy duh duh duh duh music playing*
ichigo-RUKIA LOOK OUT - ARGHHHHHH
rukia-ICHIGO NOOOO Some no mai, Tsukishiro
*hollow dies*
~end flash back~
ichigo-R-rukia-a i lo- i love y-y *ichigo dies*
she turns to a red haired guy who wore a black kimino with a sword slung to his side
rukia-Renji please look after him
renji-sure ruks for you, when will you be back?
rukia-after i see his family
renji turns to look at the group of people getting closer
renji-hey ruks
rukia-yea renji
renji-it looks like you dont have to go to then
rukia-Huh?
*she looks where he points to see ichigo's father isshin and two sisters yuzu and karin running over shortly followed by rukia's and ichigo's school friends the big breasted orihime, the nerdy quincy ishida and sad the big mexican*
isshin-RUKIA what happend where is ichigo? his retsue is gone?
rukia-he is O-over there
*they all look to where she pointed to see ichigo's blood body
isshin-NO my only boy
*they were all nelt down beside his body sobbing even the tough mexican who hardly spoke
ishida-Rukia what happened?
orihime-YEA WHAT HAPPENED!
ishida-orihime calm down im certain it was not her fault
orihime-NO ISHIDA I WILL NOT CALM DOWN, HE PUT HIS FAITH IN YOU WE ALL DID, AND KNOW HE IS DEAD AND YOU ARE STILL ALIVE YOU BITCH
rukia-we-we were arguing but another hollow appered but we did not notice itm till it was too late it went for me but ichigo pushed me out of the way, im sorry isshin
isshin-no it is okay at least he died protecting a loved one, so he never did ask you out then?
rukia-Huh? what do you mean Mr Kurosaki?
isshin-Well rukia my son loves you, if you dont belive me ask ishida or chad, judging by the look on orihime's face she did not know
rukia-H-h-he loved me... "R-rukia-a i lo- i love y-y " i cant belive it.
ishida-its true rukia-san he told me him self
chad-Mmmmm
rukia-that idiot never told me
yuzu-Erm ishida?
ishida-yea yuzu
yuzu-you may wanna have a word with orihime *points*
ishida looks where she points to see orihime getting angrier bye the minute
ishida-*gulp* Erm orihime whats the matter?
orihime-he was sopposed to love me, ME, not HER!
ishida-calm down he died protecting her he chose to do it
orihime-yea but he was ment to like me
ishida-no orihime dont you get it?
orihime-get what i-shi-da
ishida-it is me that likes you not him he likes rukia we all know that
orihime-you like me ishida?
ishida-yes since the day i first laid eyes on you~
orihime- *blush*
orihime-lets go home ishida *grabs hand*
rukia-are you of as well chad?
chad-Yes
rukia-look im sorry
chad-its okay he would have wanted it
rukia-thanks and thats the most you have ever said :)
chad-Mmmm bye
'with ishida, orihime and chad gone the people that were left were rukia and the kurosaki family'
isshin-rukia did he say anything before he went?
rukia-yes he said he loves you all
isshin-mmmm well lets get his body and go home there is no point in staying out here in the cold. are you coming rukia?
rukia-yea i guess
~mean while~
ichigo-damn my stomach hurts last time i play with a hollow *rubs belly*
thug leader-HEY YOU FREAK!
ichigo-oh for god sake
ichigo-WHAT!
thug leader-WE WANNA FIGHT YOU!
ichigo-YEA
thug 1-YEA
ichigo-WELL BRING IT ON YOU STUPID BALD HEADED IDIOT!
thug leader-IM NOT BALD!
ichigo- WELL FROM HERE IT LOOKS LIKE IT BALDY, BALDY, BALDY
thug leader-GET HIM BOYS!
~10 minutes later~
ichigo-WHAT IS THAT ALL YOU HAVE GOT?
thug 1-ohhh my head hurts
thug 2-i think my legs broke
thug leader-MY NOSE, MY BEAUTIFUL NOSE
ichigo-OH SHUT UP!
thug leader-ARGHHHHHH
*silence*
ichigo-OPPS i think i killed him
thug 1-ARGH RUN AWAY!
thug 2-I CANT MY LEGS BROKE
~other side of soul socity~
renji-dammit ichigo were are you? she is going to kill me?
matsumoto-who is going to kill who renji?
renji-oh matsumoto? rukia will
matsumoto-why is she gonna kill you? did you do something wrong?
renji-What? No .. ichigo died so know im trying to find him
matsumoto-wait ichigo died?
renji-yea a hollow killed him while he was protecting rukia
matsumoto-well its to late know so look in the morning, plus i can get some help
renji-yea i soppose so
~meanwhile on earth~
isshin-Hey rukia
rukia-Yea isshin?
isshin-When are you setting of back?
rukia-not long why?
isshin-i need to talk to you
rukia-oh? okay
isshin-take a seat please
rukia-Errmmm sure *sits down*
isshin-well were do i start?
~next day~
renji-Erm rangiku what is this lot doing here?
matsumoto-they came to help
renji-but this lot
matsumoto-Huh?
renji-toshiro and hisagi but why is zaraki, ikkaku and yumichika here?
matsumoto-ohhh they wanted to help
renji-yea but why?
matsumoto-i dont know?... hey zaraki-tichou ikkaku, yumichika why you want to help?
zaraki-to finish off our fight duh plus we would have to do paperwork otherwise
~meanwhile~
ichigo-Hey how do i get to seritie from here?
stranger-oh just keep going that way
ichigo-thanks (wierd but the tower is the other way)
stranger-yea the orange haired demon is on his way know boss
thug leader-good work, he will pay for what he did to my nose
~meanwhile~
rukia-oh my god i cant belive what isshin told me, its so wierd, oh well i wonder if renji has bayakuya-him yet?
rukia-Oh nii-sama i did not see you there...
bayakuya-so he has died has he?
rukia-what how did you?
bayakuya-renji told matsumoto who told every one else
rukia-oh ok
bayakuya-what did isshin tell you?
rukia-ah he said that ichigo...
~meanwhile~
ichigo-that old bloke must have given me wrong directions!
thug leader-NO he gave you the right ones alright
ichigo-not you again baldy
thug leader-IM NOT BALD
ichigo-YEA SURE
thug leader-GET HIM NOW!
*ichigo gets knocked out*
meanwhile
renji-hey thats ichigo's reiatsu lets go guys
matsumoto-HEY!
renji-and girls
yachiru-YAY KEN-CHAN gets to play with ichi
zaraki-IM GOING TO SOO LOVE THIS
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