Into my Dream World Of DC
I think almost all of you that are reading my story have read my friend Chelsea's story called " Into The World Of Detective Conan". If not you must read it, it is the best story in the history of stories, and she inspired this story that I'm writing this very second. This story is from my perspective at all times. Since I am better at writing about myself. Also I would like to change the story a little bit too.
Tips to help you understand the story:
1. Read Chelsea's story first
2. Private Message Chelseaj500 (a.k.a. Chelsea)
3. Give me feedback about the story so I can help you understand it.
4. Like my story!
6. I have no more tips for you guys sorry!
I skipped 5 if any of you guys notice.
Here's is the story you've been waiting for:
Yo peoples! This is the magical journal that is inside my head. This will tell you all about the adventures I had at DC's world. It started out with me running after Chelsea, a bright flash and
Chelsea gone. I rushed to the spot thinking "This is a lot like Kaito's way of doing things. Suddenly there was another bright flash and with the feeling that someone (or something) was pulling my leg I blacked out.
The next thing that happened was me being carried by Vodka, that ugly gorilla (at least that's what Chelsea told me, I wasn't awake at that time) and I arrived at Agasa's house sleeping on the couch.
When I could see again I started screaming "Oh my gosh, it's Conan! I took a step forward and started hugging him. I heard a grunt and let go to see who could have said that. I turned to look and saw Heiji and ran over too him and started to hug him. I looked around to see if there was anyone else to hug when I saw him and I heard Chelsea say "Oh boy." and I screamed "Kaito!" I ran over to him and started hugging him so hard i thought I heard him cough. I was so excited i forgot to stop. When I finally looked up I saw that he was about to run away from me. There was a poof and I found myself hugging empty air. As I started to blush Chelsea grabbed my arm (I didn't even realise she was there till then) and started to explain everything, but before she could talk I said
"Why is your hair blue?"
"Never mind that Julia lets get down to work"
"Were not working."
"Julia you really need to listen to this."
"What's this?"
And so the conversation went on like this me asking questions and Chelsea, being anoyed with the questions, just pretented I didn't say that. But if they were important (the questions she would've asked) she would answer them as best as she could. After this "talk" we enter the room and Kaito look at me like I was a fish. Chelsea said that I was "safe" now. So I thought of what the word safe ment in that sentince and i thought it was a joke so I said "I'm safe to hug now." but apparently that safe was ment not as a joke and I felt insulted.
Then I saw Ai and since I love to hug people I started to Hug her, but apparently she new what I was thinking and said "Don't you even think about hugging me!"
"Ok" I said " mental note don't hug Ai"
"Thank you"
Then Kaito said some thing weird " why didn't you hug Hakuba"
" Who's that?"
Hi this is my first chapter and I would like you guys to Reveiw this so I can get your feedback and in that feedback i would like to ask 1 question. Do you think this was a long enough chapter? if not could you tell me about how many words a good chapter has. P.S. this chapter has 829 words! Thank you for reading!