This is my first fanfiction, well forth, but the others were rubbish so I deleted them. Anyway those who read this enjoy this story and I also welcome critiques and advise to improve my writing.

The whole idea is that I want to bring the story to the next level including action, romance and if possible some humour.

Basically the story starts after the end of Twilight Princess and slightly has some elements of Ocarina of Time. The Prologue contains some spoilers of the ending of Twilight Princess. So play the game first, though I expect anyone reading this story already did.

Rated T for a bit of violence and others.

Disclaimer: I don't own LoZ nor anything related to it.

Well, now that this is done. Let's begin!

The Legend of Zelda: March of Chaos

1. Prologue

It was still hot. The setting suns rays still possessed so much warmth. But our chosen Hero's heart contained only sadness. Here at the Dessert Coliseum lay the Mirror of Twilight, the entrance to the realm of shadows. And now that Hyrule was once again safe, came the time to part ways for our Heroes.

Midna: Link…I…see you later…

With those last words her teardrop made contact with the Mirror of Twilight, shattering it into thousands of pieces. And Midna…was gone. She was back in her own realm. Back were she belonged.

You too, I'll see you later.

Zelda: Link…I can not put into words how much I am, no the whole of Hyrule is in debt to you. Is there anything that can be done to show you our gratitude towards your heroic deeds?

Link: I am highly honoured princess Zelda. But there is nothing that you or Hyrule owe me. I merely protected those who are dear to me, nothing more nothing less.

Zelda: You have a pure heart. I can see why the goddesses have chosen you to be the wielder of the Triforce of Courage. Now then, I believe it is time for us that we go our separate ways. Return to those people who are dear to you.

Link: Yes princess, I shall take my leave then.

This time Zelda was the first to reach out her hand. Smiling Link accepted it and made his leave. Without Midna it would take a lot longer to return to Ordon. Meanwhile Zelda couldn't shake the feeling of warmth off of her hand. His hand like before, when they fought Ganondorf, was gentle and warm, something that wasn't unpleasant to her. Their encounters were only brief, but nonetheless was she able to witness the kindness and braveness of this young man. As she watched him retreat into the dessert, a feeling of sadness overcame her.

It couldn't be, could it? No it can't be. You are supposed to be the ruler of Hyrule. There is no way that you can act like a spoiled girl anymore. That's right. There is a Kingdom waiting for me to be rebuilt. I don't have time for such foolishness right now.

With that the princess of Hyrule, too made her way home. There was a lot of work she had to do.


In the meantime in another realm there are tree shadows gathering at a place still unknown to our clueless Heroes. One of those shadows reveals himself to be a man. His body seems to be quite muscular; he wears mostly black except for his bone armour and his dark blue cape. His skin is slightly blue and he head is bald. The main attraction to this man are his white pupils, which would send chills down your spine, if by any chance you'd meet him in a dark room. On the other side of the chamber was another shadow revealing it self to be a man, too. Though they shared the same skin colour, were the differences in appearance significant. This man was by one head shorter than the other, but nonchalant a tall man. His clothes consist of brown leather boots, red trousers and also a red sleeveless shirt with brown leather gauntlets. There was nothing special about his face: shoulder long black hair as well as black eyes. You could say he was quite handsome. The only thing that made him different from other men was that he always smiled from one ear to the other. Last but not least the third shadow came into view. This time though it appeared to is a woman clad in a half black and half red latex bodysuit showing a lot of her cleavage. In addition she wore black high heels and a red mask with horns which hid half of her pretty face. Her hair colour is blue and quite long reaching the lower of her back. If by any chance you're no caught in the middle part of her body then there is only one other place you'd be looking for, which are her eyes, or better to say her one eye because the other is hidden behind the mask. They are a violet colour which make you want to drown in and die a happy death without regret.

Male A: Kukukukuku…So Ganondorf is dead…

Female: Aw…that's just too bad. And he was such a lovely man. Maybe I should have lent him a hand.

Male B: Pf…What a weakling. Did the fool really believe that the Triforce was enough to conquer the world? Well I wouldn't deny the thought, if it were for me to get to the task.

Male A: Now, now, we didn't assemble here to speak badly of the dead, do we?

Male B: Hmpf…suit yourself! I am insulting who I want to.

Male A: My, my, please don't make such a scary face. You are going to get wrinkles if you don't stop. Oh my bad, you already have.

Male B: What did you say just now?! Do you want to pick a fight?

Male A: Of course not. I would never dare taking such violent methods.

Male B: Damn you! Mocking me again?!

The bigger one of the two males was just about to hit the other, when suddenly the female intervened.

Female: That's enough you two. You both know that I am not a friend of conflicts. So would you please get along already?

The woman then jumped at the bigger guy, clinging to his arm and drawing small circles on it with her finger.

Female: And you know. Those wrinkles really don't suit you.

Male B: Stop clinging to my arm wench!

Female: Nuuu…not cute at all!

She then went to the smaller man also clinging to his arm.

Male A: I think we teased him enough now, don't you agree?

Female: OK I'll stop, though it's so much fun!

Male B: Rot in hell wench!

Male A: See, now he's angry.

Female: I'm soooo sorry. Please don't be angry anymore.

Male B: …

Male A: I think he has forgiven you. Oh well, back to the topic. Now that Ganondorf is out of our way, it is time that we reclaim our plans.

Female: Hey, can I go pay a visit to the princess of light? I am dying to give her a piece of my mind.

Male A: patience, patience the time will come soon. There are just some preparations that need to be done.

To be continued


Alright that's it for the Prologue. Are you already eager to find out who this mysterious people are?

And also tell me if you prefer the style of the dialogue like this or shall I change it to be more authorial?