I don't own FMA, just some of my characters. I read a lot of FMA stories so I decided to do one myself. I will change the plot A LOT, so I need to know what you think. Well, let's give it a try. I'm so scared:/

Edward

The rain was so beautiful. Little drops of water began to fall everywhere around me and Alphonse, and the sky began to silently tremble. That little nice and yet strange rain turned into storm. Just a sad city surrounded by that mist of rain.

'C'mon Ed, hurry or we'll get wet!' Al shouted and we began to run.

'Well, that means we're actually back to Central.' I said with a smile with my face. Yet again my heart began to beat faster. He said we'll get wet, even though he cannot get wet. I watched how those rain drops ran through his armor. He can't feel the rain. He can't feel that smell of the rain or that cold wind of this storm. He just runs and he can't…

'What's wrong, brother?' Al stopped and looked at me. For some time I just gaze at his eyes and then I clenched my fist.

I hated rain. Rain gave me only melancholy and sadness. Some myths that say a lot of horrible things about rain. For example, one says that rain drops are actually the tears of the undead, those, who are trapped between two worlds, who just want to die. Even though, now I was grateful to that horrible rain. It actually mixed up with my tears.

'Let's go.'

'Wait brother!'

'Welcome back, Fullmetal' Colonel Mustang said and looked at me. 'How was your journey?' he asked and sat back. He screwed his eyes and sighed as I gave him a cold glare. 'As I presume, you found out something disturbing about the Philosopher Stone so you gave up and ran like a stray dog.' Colonel folded his fingers and smiled sarcastically. 'Well, that's to be expected. You are a dog of the military, aren't you?' Mustang said and our eyes met. I could have hit him. I was so angry that I felt how my skin was getting hotter and hotter. I actually thought that I will jump on his desk and rip his head off, since Lieutenant Hawkeye and Al weren't anywhere near.

'Brother!' I heard Alphonse's voice and I turned around. He was standing in the middle of the chamber. I wanted to ask him what's up, but put of nowhere, just in front of my eyes, a giant picture of a little girl appeared.

'Here, isn't she just lovely? Elicia is now so big she can…'

'Hughes, get out of my office! I have work to do and you as well' Mustang sighed and angrily looked at Hughes.

'I heard that you and your brother don't have a place to stay in? Well, my wife and my daughter Elicia would be more than happy to have you!' Hughes grabbed my and I was 'kidnapped'.

'Brother!'

'Fullmetal' Colonel stood up and Hughes and I stopped. Now he didn't seem angry- more like worried or even scared. 'Don't go out alone. Scar is somewhere in the Central, so it might be dangerous to investigate on your own.'

'Scar is in the Central?' Al asked and I walked to Mustang. I took my silver pocket watch and put it on his desk. 'Here' I said and Mustang screwed his eyes again. 'I'm not a state alchemist- I don't need to obey your orders anymore. Let's go Al.' I turned around. Mustang didn't say anything; he just kept quiet till we were gone from his office for good.

We walked next to Hughes in silent. He probably was happy enough since we were going to his house to see his daughter Elicia. Al probably wanted to talk; maybe he wanted to say it's not right to do so, that Colonel is actually right, but we both knew that Scar killed Winry's parents and that a fight with him might lure homunculus to us.

'Mommy mommy! Why is the little brother actually the big brother?' The little brat asked and I turned red.

'Ed stop' Al said. 'They are really kind to let us spend the night here. You should be grateful…'

As the dinner time came, I sat next to Al and we began to eat. He, of course, just sat and looked into Elicia, which sometimes give him a nice smile. Everybody kept quiet, listening to the blowing wind, sometimes looking through the window to find the dark clouds of night hiding the sun. The candles were calm too. Those little blazes sometimes trembled but they were thin and little, almost not noticeable.

'Elicia, drink your milk' finally Gracia Hughes spoke to her daughter.

'I don't want to.' She said and folded her hands. Hughes smiled and whispered to her ear:

'If you don't drink your milk you'll be a shrimp, like Edward' they both giggled and I shouted:

'Hey I heard that!'

'Brother, calm down!' Al caught me and pressed my body hardly, waiting for my anger to disappear. I felt something strange, something that tickled my heart. I felt a part of something, finally a part of something. I haven't felt like this since mum died, when I attached Al's body to that armor. I didn't find any place like home, I didn't' find any people like family. An there they were, sitting, eating, laughing and loving each other, feeling happy no matter what would happen… This was what we longed for. I sighed and stood up. Everybody looked at me and I left in silence. After some time, I was able to hear their voices, full of joy.

'..Brother?' Al was standing behind me, silently waiting for me to answer something. I wish I could say anything to him. But there were no words, I believe.

'Al' my voice sounded so weak and pathetic, yet I didn't stop. 'I know this is not right. But this is the least I can do for Winry.' I said and stood up. I looked into the night sky, the silent, completely wet city and I sighed. 'You stay here and look after things, k? I'll be back in no time' I said and walked out of the room. Al was calling out for me, but I didn't listen.

If he would ask me, why you want to fight Scar so badly, I wouldn't answer. What can a man, who knows nothing about himself, answer? I just knew that's the last thing Colonel, as well as the homunculus, like me to do. And that was enough for me. I walked outside and looked into the full moon, such a big and bright moon, almost identical to sun, yet it's still not it. The sad, cold moon was the only thing that leaded a stupid man. But somehow… That was more than enough.

Well, actually I'm skipping a lot of things that's too boring or too common in FMA fan fictions. Remember, my story's plot will be REALLY different, a lot of OCs and maybe some original anime involved too(since this is more like Brotherhood, well, it'll have Mei, Ling and my favorite Greeling:3). If there's at least one person who likes it- I will write. Just don't be very angry or impolite( you can say it's crap in many different ways). So please, review, say your opinion, what's good, what's bad and I am suppose to write it or not. Anywayo, thx for reading! :33