yamato2706: Hi everyone, this is my new story, which is a rewrite version of wolfboydude58's Outlaw Unleashed. I only change a "little" from the original storyline and add some more things to the story so it could be better. Hope you guys will support me. And also, I need a small amount of OC. Please go to my profile to look at the form and rules. I'll keep accepting OC until I say so. Now, without further ado, I give you the first chap of my story.
EP 1: The birth of chaos world
(Music Insert: Pokemon Exploration Team Theme)
In a world where only the creatures known as Pokemon exists, the Pokemon live happily together. However, everything has its own dark side. Some Pokemon start turning bad and make crimes, and the number of them keeps going up. That's why an organization called Exploration Team is made. Their mission is to catch the outlaws and explore the Mystery Dungeon, a place with a curse that can change its layout each time someone enters. Many Pokemon want to become an explorer, so they train in a Guild, which can be found in most citys and towns. The most famous Guild is the Wigglytuff's Guild residing in TreasureTown. Its headmaster is a carefree Wigglytuff, but when he's serious, he'll become a totally different person. The greatest success of this Guild is training Team Pokepals, which is founded by a Pikachu and Riolu. They saved the world from the Paralyzing Planet crisis and solved the Darkrai Nightmare case. Not so long after that, the Pikachu, who actually comes from a different world and timelines, decided to return to his world and live his normal life. 6 years later, the used to be coward Riolu now is a Lucario and becomes the new leader of team Pokepals. With his teamates, they continue bringing peace to this world. But yet they didn't know it's the begin of a dark era.
(Music Insert: In the future)
The Omega Prison
This is the prison where only the most dangerous outlaws are put in. It is located on top of the SpikeMountain, the highest mountain on the northern land covered with snow all the year. The prison obviously has the best security system, with electronic device everywhere inside the building to keep the prisoners in control. The prison also has a whole of army of Acrcanine in the prison's field to keep an eye on them. The head of the prison is an Alakazam, who is considered to be the most intelligent and experienced explorer. The only one he treated as his rival is the most dangerous criminal. One day, when he heard that criminal is caught, he was really surprised and pleased by the news.
A Metagross was transferred to the Omega Prison that day. Chief Magnezone and the Magnemite put him inside a steel box with electronic barrier and there's only a a window to let him see outside. When they arrived at the gate of the prison, Chief Magnezone pressed a button near the gates and said: "IT'S ME, MAGNEZONE…BZZ… I'M HERE TO DELIVER THE NEW PRISONER".
"Roger, sir," a voice from the speaker said.
After they heard a "click" sound, the electronic door opened, letting the polices go inside with the captured outlaw. They let him out and then forced him to go through a machine
"PRISONER REGISTERING… REGISTER COMPLETE! NAME: AKAGI. SPECIES: METAGROSS. OUTLAW'S CODE: 549806. OUTLAW'S RANK:5*. MARKING IS IN PROCESS. PLEASE STAY STILL"
A laser gun popped out and made a mark on Metagross's upper left leg.
"MARKING COMPLETE. WELCOME TO THE OMEGA PRISON"
(Stop the music)
The Chief Magnezone lead the Metagross through the hallway of the prison. All the cells here has thick glass door that can't be destroyed easily. Whenever they passed a cell, the prisoners looked at the newest member of the prison in full surprised. Some of them snickered and said: "The most dangerous criminal is caught now, so it mean he isn't as dangerous as we thought". Some other thought that he couldn't be the Great Metagross but a Ditto that transformed into him, or maybe another Metagross. But he didn't mind what they were saying and kept following the Magnezone. Finally, he arrived to his cell, which is not any different from the other room. Magnezone typed something on the control panel next to the door. The door opened and Metagross went into it.
"THIS IS YOUR NEW HOME…BZZ… GET USED TO IT," Magnezone said
He typed something on it again and the door closed. As Magnezone and the Magnemite was about to leave, they caught sight of a floating yellow Pokemon with 2 spoons in its hands.
"GENERAL…BZZ… GENERAL ALAKAZAM!" The Magnezone surprised "WHAT BRINGS YOU HERE…BZZ?"
"Don't worry about it, Chief," Alakazam calmly said- I just want to see my rival. You can go now.
"RIGHT AWAY…BZZ… GOOD DAY, SIR," Magnezone and the Magnemite bowed to him with respect and passed through the hallway.
Alakazam turned to the prisoner and said:
"Well, well. I never expect to see you here, Akagi. I thought I had to be the one to capture you, but oh well, it doesn't matter now".
The Iron Leg Pokemon silently looked at the General. Alakazam showed a little angered on his face.
"Hump, if you don't want to talk, fine then. I'll take my leave. Enjoy your stay here for the rest of your life"
Alakazam teleported himself out of that place, leaving the Metagross inside his cell.
"You have no idea what I intend to do, Alakazam," he said with a grin
That night, after the dinner, the prisoners returned to their respective cells. As usual, they didn't enjoy the meal not only because of the terrible food, but also because the Magneton guards were everywhere ready to zap them when if they tried to do something. Most of them couldn't take this any longer and let their anger out when they were in their room.
"Why do I have to suffer in this prison?"an Emboar punched on the nearby wall and said
In another cell, a Toxicroak mumbled: "If I wasn't here, I could be one of the most famous outlaw for stealing"
All the prisoners thought the same thing. But what can they do? Being sent to Omega Prison means they will never see the outside world again. While everyone was cursing their lives, a voice spoke in their heads
"Attention, prisoners of Omega Prison. Can you all hear me?"
The outlaws were really surprised when they heard a voice from nowhere. They tried to asked: "Who are you?", but the voice interrupted.
"Don't speak with words. I'm using telepathy to have this conversation with all of you. And if you're asking who I am, I'll tell you. I'm Akagi, the greatest outlaw of all".
Some of them were happy that the Great Metagross was speaking to them, since they idolized and respected him. The cells were a little noisy that the guard Magneton shouted: " BE QUIET… BZZ... STOP MAKING NOISE… BZZ". In order not to make the Magneton suspect them, they tried to behave well. The Metagross continued:
"The reason why I'm speaking to you right now is to announce something. Tomorrow, we'll break out of this place".
The prisoners were confused at what he said. Sure, they all wanted to break out a long time before. But how to do it was really an impossible task for them. They didn't know if they could trust him.
"I know that you are wondering how I can do it," he said. "To begin, I was caught and brought here is my plan in the first place, the plan to free you. My ability allows me to hack the security system of this place and control it. If you haven't notice this yet, there is an invisible wall that prevents us to speak telepathy. But the fact I'm speaking to you right now proves that I have shut it down. So… what is your answer? Join me or stay here forever?"
The prisoners immediately agree to his plan,because they knew that even if they didn't agree or the plan failed, they would live here until they died. So why didn't take a chance and be free to commit crime?
-Very good- he smiled- very good, indeed.
(Music Insert: Eye Catch's music of Digimon Adventure) (I don't know which music could fit in so I choose this)
Eye catch 1: A bunch of cards are shuffled while being face-down and a card is picked up randomly. It shows Metagross.
Eye catch 2: A bunch of cards are shuffled while being face-down and a card is picked up randomly. It shows Alakazam.
The next day came and the prisoners had to do their usual routine: go out to the field and break rocks. But the Arcanine guards noticed something different from yesterday. The prisoners somehow look cheerful than the day before. Usually, they would try to escape or pick up a fight with someone else. But they didn't mind it, and just thought the prisoners were well-behaved, without knowing their escaped plan.
The night soon arrived, and the outlaws were all excited. They stared at the clock hanging on the wall, which pointed 11:55, only 5 more minutes until the plan started. Meanwhile, Metagross was analyzing the security system in his cell. He had hacked most of it, and now he could control the whole prison himself. And when the clock pointed 12:00, his analyzation finished and all the cell's doors opened. (Music Insert: Outlaw!) Knowing this, the outlaws took their chance and ran through the hallway, which was now covered with red light from the alarm. The Magneton guards were so surprised at this rampage. They tried to attack them with Thunderbolt, but a Marowak raised his bone and a Rhyperior ran to the front so that the attacks changed their direction to them, which made Thunderbolt useless. As the Magneton didn't know what to do, a Poliwrath and a Primeape punched them to the wall, knocking them out. They continued running, and eventually got outside. But the Arcanine were waiting for them. Their leader gave them a signal, and they let out powerful Flamethrower. The outlaws had expected that, too. A Houndoom, a Heatmor, and a Chandelur came out and block the attack with their Flash Fire ability. Then, a Krookodile and his minios Krokorok fired their Stone Edge towards the guards. They kept on battling with each other, but obviously, the criminals were having an advantage over the guards.
(Stop the music)
Meanwhile, in General Alakazam's room, where he controls all the security system of the prison, he was trying to find out what is wrong with the system.
"Heh, having some problem, aren't you?" A voice said from behind him
Alakazam turned around as the door opened automatically, revealing the Metagross.
"I should have known that you are responsible for all of this,"Alakazam said.
"I also think that you shouldn't have put me into a prison that is controlled by electronic device. I can hack them with no trouble at all," Metagross snicker.
"I guess I underestimated you when I heard that you were caugh," he held his spoons tightly on his hands and he was in his battle position. "Then how about we finish this once and for all?"
"I was thinking the same thing, too. Let's begin, shall we?"
(Music Insert: Boss Battle)
Metagross rushed toward Alakazam and both his upper leg (or now can be called "hand") were glowing red. Alakazam quickly raised his spoons, forming an "x" mark and created a blue wall in front of him. The attack hit the wall, making Alakazam back down a little. Then he jumped on the air and closing his eyes. Surrounding him was numerous dark energy balls. He fired them at the Metagross and when they hit him, the room was covered with smoke. As Alakazam landed at the ground, thinking that Metagross was down after the hit, from behind the smoke, the Metagross rushed toward him again, and this time one of his hands was glowed white with a golden meteor in front of his claws. Althought the Reflect decreased the damage Alakazam took, the attack was so surprising and powerful enough to pin him on the wall. The Psychic-type tried to move, but Metagross's eyes glowed blue, and a blue aura surrounded Alakazam's body, which prevented him from moving. Normally, being a Psychic-type, he can easily break the Telekinisis. But because of the previous hit by the Meteor Mash, he was too weak to do anything.
"It seems you have lost this battle. And look, the guards outside were also defeated by us".
He pointed to the screen, which were recording the prison's field. It showed the Magneton and Arcanine were laying down on the ground, while the criminals were cheering for their victory.
"My plan is working perfectly. But to finish the first step of it… I'll eliminate you right now".
He prepared to use another Meteor Mash. Alakazam tried to figure something out, and then he had an idea. He used all of his remaining energy to Teleport himself out of the danger, right before the attack could hit him. The Meteor Mash hit the wall, and created a huge hole on it. Akagi sighed:
"Although I can't kill him, it doesn't affect much to my plan. I still have succeeded on freeing the outlaws".
He hacked the security system again, and in the prison's field, a hologram projection of him appeared on the air.
"Congratulations!" He announced. "We have taken control of the prison".
The crowded went wild when they heard him, and shouted out his name. After a while, the Metagross spoke again
-Now, I have another plan that needs you to cooperate with me. This plan can help us conquering the world. Of course, I won't force you to follow me. It's all depending on your decisions.
The outlaws didn't have to think, because they all have the same answer. A group of 4 Pokémon, which are Dragonite, Salamence, Garchomp and Hydreigon, walked to the front. They bowed their heads like they were bowing before a king and said:
"All of us will definitely join you… our King!"
"Perfect!" The new King of outlaws smiled evilly. "But before I begin tell you my plan, I need someone volunteers to get rid of this place for me. Is there anyone willing to do it?"
From the crowded, 3 Pokémon walked toward the 4 dragons and the hologram of Metagross. They were Charizard, Houndoom and Magmotar, who seem to be the leader of this group.
"We are Team Explosion and we will do any of your command, my King," he said.
"Oh, aren't you guys the outlaw team that used fire and bombs to destroy many places before. Very well, you are chosen to do this," Akagi said
"Then, where shall we head to?"
"It's a place pretty far from here. It's the town that has the famous Wigglytuff's Guild. Treasure Town," he said with a grin.
When the Charizard heard the name of the town, a weird expression appeared on his face.
"We got it. Let's go, guy! We have a town to destroy," Magmotar said to his teammates
They started walking out of the prison gate and headed to the south. But the Charizard was having something going on in his mind.
"So I'll go back to TreasureTown, heh?" He thought
TO BE CONTINUE…
Preview:
Rio: Although I'm not even in the episode, and also haven't been introduced yet, I can still appear now to tell you about what will happen in the next one.
Yamato: That's the spirit. After all, you're Rilu's son.
Rio: It was my first day to train in the Wigglytuff's Guild. But someone set the fire all over the town. Explosion started everywhere. The town was completely destroyed, and only a few Pokemon survived. But Dad... he... Jikai, in Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Chaos Released. Terror in Treasure Town. My new adventure is waiting for me.
yamato2706: There you go, the first chap of my new story. Hope you enjoy it
Some Pokemon appear behind the author, and judge on their look, they're not very happy.
Machop: Yamato, have you forgotten the first story you write? How can write a new one without finish the first?
Totodile: And what's with this English name for us? You only like the Japanese name, don't you?
Yamato: Guys, let me explain…
Bulbasaur: Futhermore, I thought that I was suppose to be the one playing Yamato Pokemon form. How can a Pikachu take my role?
Squirtle: And I suppose to be Yamato's partner, which now you let Riolu to do it. Do you even love us anymore?
yamato2706: Of course I still love you guys. But like I said before, this story is not mine. I just rewrite it from wolfboydude58. I promise to write the Pokemon Kanto Adventure along with this story. Beside, I already give Squirtle a specific role in the story. And for Bulbasaur, I will give a role in the next chap. Is that sound fine?
Bulbasaur: You better do it. Or else… (he grin)
yamato2706: (sweatdrop) I promise. So anyway, remember to review and send in the OC. I don't know when I can upload new chap because of school. But I promise to do it as soon as possible. Bye for now. And remember to review. They can really save my life (giggle)
EDIT #1 (5/3/2014): Add name for the Metagross and fix some minor grammar
EDIT #2 (20/4/2015): Fix some grammar and change all dialogue into the current style used in later episodes. Also having plan to change those in next episodes, too.