Bre I'm brezzie, guys! Enjoy my first fanfic! This is my 4th time writing chapter one, so I hope you like it!
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((Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke are all 15. So you know .))
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Ch. 1
Feelings Unknown
Naruto's PoV
A regular night.
We're on a mission, yeah?
We carry on as usual.
Big deal, right? It's like a routine for me: sleep, eat, mission, sleep, eat, mission, sleep, eat, and so on.
Though, one night, something caused a kind of 'disturbance' in my regular routine. We're on a mission. Same old, nothing surprising there. Our goal? To capture and interrogate three sound ninja spies. We do these things all the time, nothing to worry about! I still feel strange, today in particular. I just don't understand.
We found the three ninjas. Two males and one female. (Abumi, Dosu, and Kin) The female (Kin) had ankle-length hair tied at the ends. The first boy (Abumi) appeared to be completely normal of sorts, the kanji for 'death' written on his shirt, took forever to figure that out, must learn kanji! Well, the second boy, (Dosu) had his entire face bandaged so I have no clue of how he looks. The battle carried on. Things were going in our favor, but I still felt strange. Sasuke just took out the girl, that jerk! Showoff. I was slightly taken aback when the second boy, Dosu, I believe, yelled to us, " There is one other thing my appliance can do, you can't defeat us!" I then realized that he uses that appliance on his right arm to manipulate sound. I need to pay more attention!
I was a bit confused, but I lunged an attack for him, my kunai in my hand, Sakura screamed for me to stop, that it was dangerous. What's the point of my dream to be Hokage without taking any risks? The appliance on his arm glowed. I wondered 'is it really that bad?' I decided to chance it. I was within range for an attack, but the moment before I struck, everything went black.
I suppose I fainted... I woke up on the top of some hill in the middle of nowhere. " Sasuke-kun? Sakura-kun? Kakashi-sensei?" I yell. No answer. I look down to the bottom of the hill. A city! Bright lights, many people, I'm sure to find someone I know or a way to identify where I am!
Delete that last thought. There's no way in hell I can find anyone in this mess! (Cars) Large machines zip back and forth to my side, and there are crowds of people everywhere.I think I should give up, I sit down in front of a restraunt called 'Ichiraku Ramen', but I'm broke. I shouldn't have skipped lunch before that last mission, Bad idea! my stomach growls like crazy, I'm stuck in noman's land, and I'm hungry! (extra exaggeration xP) I look up. I see two girls walking by, one with pink hair and a blonde. I recoegnize then almost immediately. "Sakura-chan! Wait!"
Sakura's PoV
I grabbed the keys to my house off the dining room table and open the front door. "Mom! I'm going out!" I hear a muffled reply and slam the door shut. I check my watch. "6:15? Ino's going to kill me! I'm late!" I ran a block or so down the road to find Ino in front of her place, sitting on the sidewalk. "Ino! Hey!" She looks my way. "Hey, what took ya? we might miss the Sasuke-hunting!"
We planned to go and chase Sasuke for the night. I was due at her place my 6pm, but took too long getting perfect for my Sasuke! We headed off to Sasuke's place together. "Let's take the long way!" Ino demanded. "We can chat on our way over!"
Sasuke's place is usually only 10 minutes away using back roads and alleys as shortcuts, but the long was is over twice that, a good half-hour hike through the city. We head on out. "So... let's talk about... Boys!" Ino, again, demands. She's that kind of person. I snicker, "By boys, you mean Sasuke, right?" Ino drools. "He's just so damn HOT!" She squeals. We were halfway there when we passed a noodle shop, 'Ichiraku?' I think, 'Sounds familiar for some reason or another.'
I looked down and saw a boy our age sitting in front of the place. I recoegnized him as Uzumaki, the prankster, master of pranks, might I add, at our school. He looked up, Oh, God! Don't let him notice me! And, ironically, he does. I hear him behind be. "Sakura-chan! wait!" I beckon Ino to move faster, but Naruto catches up anyways. I looked him over. 'someone call the fashion police! Major violation!' Is my first impression. An orange jacket and pants. It's the end of Summer, school starts in only days, and Naruto's dressed for winter. 'dobe.'
End PoV
Ino and Sakura turn around to see Naruto. Sakura's annoyed as hell, he's wasting Sasuke time! " What in the nine layers of Hell do you want, Uzumaki?" (always wanted to put that) She prayed that he'd lust leave. Nope. " What happened to the mission?"
Sakura did a double take, " What? Mission?"
Naruto stared. 'first off, she's with that Ino girl, now she's playing dumb?' " The sound nin?"
"Who?"
Naruto shook it off. " So, where are we?"
"Um, A-me-ri-ca. Dobe."
"O... kay... Where's that?"
Sakura growled
"Um, Where's Sasuke?"
"We're looking for him so we can chase him. He's probably already running from the many fangirls, like us, who're following him begging him to date them!"
"Oh... what?"
"Idiot! Lemme ask you: What's with the outfit? Your mom dress you? Are you stalking me? Why are you so damn ignorant?"
Naruto grabbed her hand and dragged her off to a nearby alleyway, where Ino couldn't find tham and they were alone.
"Naruto, stop!" He gripped her wrist an refused to let go, despite her effort. " Help! Stalker!"
Naruto gripped tighter, and she shut up (finally!) "Sakura, don't play dumb. What happened to the Otonin?"
"Oto- What the fuck are you talking about, Stalker boy?"
"Ninjas? You sure you don't remember?" She nodded. Naruto sighed and sat her down, explaining everything ranging from Akatsuki to Lee's massive super-brows. (how could that not come up?) Sakura seemed to be in a state of shock after the story revealed itself. She stared at him, expecting Asten Kutcher to jump out from behind the nearest garbage can and yell, "You've been Punk'd!"
Nope, no Ashten. "What about our school, Konoha High? Don't you remember that?" Naurot shook his head. "no"... there was an uneasy silence. Naruto jumped up. "Sakura-chan, where's Sasuke's place? Take me there to talk to him!" So she did, they ran to Sasuke's place, wait, correction, Sakura dragged Naruto to Sasuke's place, as in literally. 'The Uchiha manor- it's huge!' Naruto thought, 'I guess the Uchihas really are that great-- Wait! Sasuke's parents! They're alive? Bloody fucking hell, this day gets weirder with each passing second.'
Itachi, well, so they thought, answered the door. Wearing a hairnet and bunny slippers. " What the hell?" Sakura dragged Naruto up the stairs. "Well, thanks for thanking me, Dobes!" Sakura opened the door to Sasuke's room. He was spinning in his spinney- computer- chair- thing. For lack of better words... Sakura hugged him, He looked as if, had he been in an internet chatroom, he would've said 'HOLYSHITOMGWTFBBQ!11oneeleven11!", but he wasn't. He looked as if he were to kill Sakura at any given moment.
Sasuke's PoV
Shit! It's late and I just got home. Damned fangirls, someone needs to lay off the sugar for a while, drink some decaff for a few days, just calm the fuck down! I run up to my room, unaware of Itachi yelling at me to answer the phone, and that there're calls for me on lines one thru ten. 'Idiot, there's only ten lines!' I throw my bag onto the floor, I just bought a new CD, Linkin Park, 'Meteora'. I'd been saving up. I sat in my computer- spinny- chair and spun... Bed, Tv, poster(that reads 'fangirls must die' might I add), bed, TV, poster, bed, TV, Sakura, poster, Wait! Sakura? She jumps on top of me. If my life were a chatroom online, I'd say 'HOLYSHITOMGWTFBBQ!11oneeleven11!', but it's not.
I swear, I'm about ready to kill her, and all her little fangirl mafia.I notice the Master Prankster- Naruto- in my doorway. 'Sakura must enjoy torturing me enough to add more and more people to her mafia.' "Sasuke, Naruto wants to have a serious talk with you." I looked at Sakura, straight in the eyes. She seemed to be taking this seriously, if it's so serious, why pummel me right beforehand?
She directs Naruto in, He sits on my bed and looks around. My room's nothing noteworthy. Blue walls, a tv, posters, and my stereo system, with cd's overflowing off my shelves. "So," Naruto begins and I pay full attention, " Do you remember anything about being a ninja?" I stare at him for whgat seems like forever, though it's probably only five minutes. "So, I guess I can take that as a 'no'?" Naruto sighs. "No one else remembers! Why is this happening. Why me? What's wrong with you two...?"
He laid his head in his hands, waiting for Sasuke's reply.
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