AN:
I've gotten a few complaints about the story. Things like grammar and not editing it enough, and a few other things that the reviewers would like me to fix. Make the story flow more, and I'm going to tweak the plot a bit so it's a little bit easier to follow. I've gotten a few completes that the plots a bit too complicated to follow. The story won't be down long, at most three days. And by the end of it I hope to have the sixth chapter up when I put it back up. So if you had any issues with the story then send me a message or review in the next three days and it'll get fixed.
Lastly I'd like to thank all the reviews and people who have read my story. I know that they're not a lot compared to other stories, but this is one of the first stories I've put a lot of effort in too so the feedback's appreciated. Hopefully when the story is put back up you'll find that the changes I've made make it a better story.
