Summary- This is how the Hundred Acre Woods and all its inhabitants came to be. This is the revised edition and I've finally fixed all the errors I had in the past. Hope you enjoy!
The Begining Of The Hundred Acre Woods
It was the first week of summer vacation for Christopher Robin. He had been looking forward to summer for a long time, and now that it was here, he wished he was back in school. In school he had friends to hang out with, and he had school activites to do, but now it was over. Most of his friends were busy, and there were no summer camps in the area. The only things he could find to do were watching tv and playing alone with his old boring toys. He did have one thing to look forward to though, his birthday.
His birthday was one of his favorite holidays, next to Christmas and Easter. Soon he would have new toys to play with, and
there would also be a party for the occasion. "Boy," Christopher Robin thought, "this is gonna be great."
The day of his birth finally came. His mom had baked him a chocolate cake, with wipped cream icing dyed yellow, and on top were seven candles. His grandparents, friends, and some of his neighbors came to his party. Each person arrived with a gift rapped in various papers. Christopher couldn't wait to rip into those!
The celebration lasted for three hours and soon it was time for everyone to leave. Christopher ended up recieving some board games, clothes, and a set of stuffed animals including a bear, pig, rabbit, and tiger. After cleaning up the mess of the party, Christopher Robin went upstairs to check out his stuff. The clothes weren't that exciting, neither were the board games without another person. As for the stuffed animals, well, they didn't seem like the stuff seven year olds were seen playing with to much.
All in all, Christopher Robin felt like he had gotten the worst gifts in his intire life.The next day, Christopher was in his room lying around. He had stacked his new board games and clothes in the closet, and had placed the animals scattered on the floor. Soon Christopher started to drift into a light sleep. He was soon awakened by a strange rumbling sound. He opened his eyes, and found that he was no longer in his room, but in a strange forest. "How did I get here?" he thought "What is going on?"
Christopher Robin stood up and he heard the rumbling sound again, but now it seemed much louder. He looked around at his surroundings, but saw nothing. He kept hearing the rumbling sound again and again, each time louder and louder. When Christopher thought the rumbling wouldn't stop, it did, and it its place he heard a voice coming towards the place he was at. Christopher decided to hide in a nearby bush. Soon, Christopher saw what was making the noise, and when he did, his eyes rolled back in his head and everything went dark.
The being that was traveling toward Christopher saw the bush move as the young boy passed out. He went toward the bush
cautiously, being afraid it was a heffalump or woosle. When he was close he peared over the bush and saw the boy. "Oh
bother," the creature said, and took off running. Soon, the creature returned and he had brought his friends to help him.
They made a circle around Christopher and poured water onto his face. It revived him and he woke up to see a bear, tiger,
pig, and a rabbit all looking like the toys he had recieved the day earlier.
Who are these creatures and where is Christopher Robin at. To be continued if I get some good reviews.