Crimson: Hello nice to meet you all and welcome to my first Fanfiction.YAY
Akuma: First????
Crimson: Yes first, I don't have my old account anymore
Akuma: But your other ones still count though, don't they
Crimson: Not really anymore since I haven't done anything with those in years and I can't do anything with them now so what's the point?
Akuma: The point is that those stories are still yours plus those had Tenshi in those introductions.
Crimson: Don't remind me, one more reason I'm not looking at those.
Akuma: what's the other reason?
Crimson: I wrote those went I was what 13 maybe 14 years old and in my weird teenage fantasy phase
Akuma: Oh, well it can't be that bad
Crimson: Oh yes it can and I'm going to avoid it like it's the black plague and while saying that let's get on with the story. This my dear friends is a fanfiction about FLOWERFELL if you don't know what that is well then let me explain. FLOWERFELL is an AU (alternate universe) of the very fun game know as UNDERTALE. If you're unfamiliar with Undertale I suggest you stop reading and play the game first okay. The game is owned by Toby Fox. So I own none of the characters unless they are OC. Now I know Flowerfell technically isn't a game and I actually have no idea who came up with it. But whoever did thank you this story slightly belongs to you as well I think. Though It own only the idea sort of.
Akuma: what do you mean sort of?
Crimson: well let's see an easy way to pit this is I read what I believe the story is about with flowerfell and I liked it sure but then again I didn't.
Akuma: okay, can you explain a little more.
Crimson: okay so I read overgrowth and the fallen city as well as I unexpected but there are plot holes in the story I don't like. I wanted more to it and i wanted an explanation to certain parts.
Akuma: Okay, wait who wrote those?
Crimson: I believe it was Kazefiend who wrote them and don't get me wrong she/he has really great work but I felt like there were things that were missing in the story line. So this is kind of a remake of that as well.
Akuma: Oh
Crimson: yeah but it's not going to be the exact same this one is technically mine because im not going to have the same names or stuff like that. I am going to keep things the same to a moderate point but I still want to have it be different you know. So its also mine
Akuma: sort of. So this story though with its characters and certain parts belong to Toby Fox and Kazefiend right.
Crimson: right
Akuma: and you only own this idea of this story and certain things that you change
Crimson: Yes, anything from the original stories is theres however whats mine is mineAkuma: Well okay the then.Crimson: Good now lets get this started.
Chapter 1, The Fall
MOUNT EEBOT
Its a beautiful day outside the mountain. The sun was high in the sky and there wasn't a cloud in sight. It was a perfect day for me to die. I am glad it's not raining today I don't want to feel cold drops of water on me when I die I'd rather feel ray's of the sun on my skin. For once I'll know what it will feel like to be safe and warm in this cruel world. I smiled at the thought.
I dressed my best today, well at least in my favorite outfit. Though it wasn't the best to hike up a mountain in. I mean I'm wearing a deep blue sweater with two purple stripes, black shorts, black knee high socks, and brown ankle high leather boots. However I'm not dying in hiking gear.
I didn't think it would be so easy to climb though. Each step I took made my heart race with excitement. I heard that people who came up here never returned and I don't want to return here ever again. I hate the violence that is used to survive. Everyone here has to step on others just to get ahead and for what we all die in the end. I wanted my life to amount to something when I was younger. But I've been an orphan since I can remember. No family wanted to me, I couldn't make Any real friends. I was always told I was too nice. It's not the worst thing to be called in fact I took it as a compliment. But no one else in this world thinks it's that great. In the past 18years of my life I've hoped that kindness would be enough. However it never was and I've been hurt so much that I give up on hoping for it here. I give up on a life I could be accepted in.
I am finally here. I'm ready to disappear and be free from this world. I looked a little ahead of me and saw an enormous hole in the ground. I walked up to it to see how far down it went however I couldn't really see because there were so many jagged edges but I figured it was good enough. If I ran and jumped I would miss those at least it looked that way. So I took a few steps back and then ran towards the hole. Well sadly I'm a klutz and I tripped down into it. I hit every edge on the way down ripping parts of my clothes slightly and hitting and becoming unconscious after hitting my head a couple times. I didn't expect to wake up.
~to be continued
Crimson: Thank you so much for reading this. I know it's short but it is a great starter tell me what you think so far. Also I am going to be working on some art designs to show you guys exactly how she looks in this version. Remember this is still Flowerfell so the look will stay moderately the same however also slightly different yay!!! You can see on my Instagram account Crimson_Hobbit18. You can also ask me questions if you want to there I'll be very happy to answer them don't worry. Now if you're going to ask me questions about what I'm going to do for the chapters ahead well sorry but your going have to continue reading and find out.
~Sincerely CrimsonHobbit