A/N- This will not be my last venture into the Shinobi universe but it will be my first. please review with constructive criticism.
Blind
I see him
I watch him
day after day he keeps coming back
He never notices me to wrapped up in his grief
the little things you give him to ease his pain
it may be a shurikin or candy but he doesn't see
too blinded by his pain
I see him on the battlefield
a deadly dancer flying through his enemy's
while I am just barley holding on
and so I vow to grow stronger
to keep on living until I can see him truly happy
Suddenly it looks like the mist has risen
from his pain filled eyes
he started laughing and smiling
though oh so rare
I see him
I watch him
and I die before him
in a flurry of lighting justu
the enemy finally shot me down
and I cry when my heart stops because I will never see him truly happy
A/N – Is it good is it bad please send me a review or PM me if you can not figure out who 'he' is.
P.S THERE I MADE THE CORRECTIONS NOW WILL YOU LEAVE ME IN PEACE?!