When Bad Gets WORSE
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So, a new life, starting out in Ponyville. This isn't going to end well. Um, my name is Jynx. I'm a colt that came out of Fillydelphia. BIG whoop.
Any who, this, journal thing, is supposed to be about my, you guessed it, new life in Ponyville. And it is supposed to go to Celestia and what not. But so far, when bad gets worse, it never goes right.
So, as far as it goes, my name is actually Jynx. SO when I walked into Ponyville, everyone wanted to know my name. And when I told them it, they didn't believe me. Mean, right? Anyway, I met a super cool pegasus named Rainbow Dash, and we hit it off. She seemed pretty nice, and I told her about my previous life in Fillydelphia. She felt kind of bad for me, and you'll soon figure out why. She told me that a super fun pony named Pinkie Pie was at Sugarcube Corner. Apparently, Dash wanted me to meet her.
And so I did.
Pinkie was pretty fun and all, but sadly, my name was a disappointment to her.
"JYNX?!" She yelled. "What kind of name is that? Are you literally cursed, or jinxed or something?" She had giggled.
"Actually, yes." I had replied. As soon as her jaw dropped open, the door slammed open too.
"APPLEJACK! There's this new colt and his name is Jynx and he says he is literally jinxed and my jaw dropped open, and you came in and I told you about him!" She gasped for a breather.
"Wait, so yer sayin' that you are literally jinxed?" Applejack wondered. She had a nice country accent.
"Yep."
Applejack trotted towards me and patted me on the back.
"I, I mean we,"-Pinkie smiled when she said this-"know a zebra that might be able to fix yer curse."
After Applejack said this, a purple unicorn, err, alicorn, trotted in.
"Twilight," Applejack said, "yer just' in time!"
"Just in time for what?" This alicorn must be blind, because she didn't notice me at all.
"We need Zecora to help this colt named Jynx to get rid of this curse thingy that he's had all his life and stuff!" Pinkie shouted.
Jeez, I thought, is it me, or does Pinkie have a loud mouth?
TO BE CONTINUED…
