'Ello there. ^.^
Black Sheep here with my first posted fanficton! My fanfic is based off of the idea of Cardverse from Hetalia (there's a lot of beautiful fanart and well-written fanfics about it- So check it out!). Instead of making it a Hetalia fanfic I wanted to make my fanfic to be about Pokemon. Also, I find Pokemon fanfics are easier to write. o.o
Couples: Drew x May, Brendan x May, Ash x Misty, Harley x Soledad, Paul x Dawn, Kenny x Zoey, Barry x Dawn (if you squint), N x White, Black x Bianca, Cheren x White (one sided), Silver x Lyra, Silver x Kris, Ethan x Kris, Gary x Leaf.
There's a lot of couples… if you see a pair that isn't mention but would like to see them PM me. I'll try to make a scene for them, but don't expect much (like a kiss or anything). I already have the main couples planned. Also try to keep it to heterosexual pairings only! I have nothing against boy love or girl love, I just don't write about it…yet. ^_^
Plot: Recently crowned King of Hearts, Drew Hayden, has much to learn about his kingdom and about being King. Though out his life he got whatever his little heart desired, as he was the son of the precious King. But with time comes changes. Major changes! Drew lost both parents, the King and Queens of Hearts, in the 100 hundred years old war between The Deck. Shortly following the death of his parents, he was sent off to rich-private school, at the age 10. Drew returns five years later to find that the Jack of Hearts has been crowned during his abstinence and that he himself is the future King of Hearts. End of story right? Wrong! Every King needs a Queen right? And the Kingdom of Hearts is no exception. The Hearts Kingdom Royals are known for having Kings and Queens that are deeply in love with each other and having epic love stories like those you would read in Fairy Tales! What will King Drew do when it's discovered that his Queen was no other then the girl whom he bullied as a kid? Can King Drew make his Queen fall in love him? Or will the Hearts Kingdom fall apart?!
Review Goal (for chapter 1): 5 reviews
Rating T (for Teen): There will be curse words! (My apologies up front if any of the words offends you in any way). ^.^
Note: My grammar isn't the best, but I will try my best to reread what's written and fix any mistakes that I see. If you see any names or words that are misspelled let me know so I can fix it.
Oh, critiques are always welcome! I'm always working on my writing, with it being style or vocabulary.
"Rise and shine, your Highness! You have important duties to fulfill today, besides lying around in bed all day," said a mother-like voice. A soft groan came from under the bed sheets. The same motherly voice spoke once more but louder, "Drew, you got five minutes. If you don't wake up, I'll get Harley in here." Hearing this, the boy known as Drew, tossed the bed sheets off him. The boy ran his fingers through his messy green hair.
"Happy now Solidad? You finally got me out of bed," the green haired boy said bitterly in defeat. The woman who's known as Solidad let out a giggle. She didn't really think that her 'little' threat would work. She knew Drew didn't care for Harley but she never thought Drew dislike the man that much. Drew let out one last groan before getting out of his bed.
"Get dress and come down for breakfast. After breakfast the fun paperwork-festivities begins," Solidad said sarcastically as she walk towards the door. "Oh I'm going to send the maids to clean up around here," Solidad said stretching out the word 'here' as she looked around the King's messy bedroom. "What happen in here any ways? It looked like a voltorb went off."
Drew was getting his clothes for day from his fairly large closet. He was only half listening to what the red-head was saying. "I was looking for something," he said dully.
"Like what?" Solidad raised a brow at the boy's statement.
"Does it matter what I was looking for? I couldn't find it, so it doesn't matter really." Drew was picked up some of his clothes off the floor and placed them in his clothes basket.
The red-head was about to make a smart remark about his room, but decided against it. She didn't have time for this. "Okay then…. So when should I send the maids in?" Solidad said in a flat tone. Drew look up from what he was doing and gave a wicked smirk.
'Oh boy,' Solidad thought to herself. She knew that smirk. And lets just say the smirk isn't something you want to see.
"By maids, you mean May?" When he said the maid's name his smirk got wider.
"Well yeah. There's also Misty, Wakana, Hannah, Marie and Josephine." As Solidad was listing off the name of maids Drew was getting drowsy. She knew she was forgot some of the girls' name but she didn't want Drew fall asleep again. She snapped her fingers to get Drew attention as he was drifting back to sleep. The noise made Drew stirred up. He was no longer smirking but wore a blank expression on his face.
"I know… I know. There's a million of them! Just have May clean it up," Drew said as he flips his bangs.
"You're so mean to that May girl. If I didn't know any better I would say you like her!" Solidad said putting her hand on her hips. This made Drew jump back a few feet.
"There's no way I'll ever like that tom-boy! I rather go out with a tree. After all she's as dense as one!" Drew said in a cooling tone, trying to regain his cool boy attitude that he was known for.
"Uh-huh, sure whatever you say. Just try not to start any fights, okay? And remember don't fall in love with her-"
"I know Sol. The King and the Queen are destine soul-mates that love forever. If I ever fall in love with someone before I meet my Queen, it's become unnecessary drama for the kingdom and the other girl will get her heart broken, blahblahblah! I heard it a thousand times already!" Drew said rolling his eyes.
"I'm just reminding you… I don't want to see May's heart get broken that's all," Solidad said biting her lower lip and looking away. "Promise to be down stair in twenty minutes okay?"
"Whatever," he quickly replied.
"You better or else," Solidad said in mother like tone. The red head gave Drew one last look before she left the room. He listened to the clicking sound of Solidad's boots as she got further and further away till he couldn't hear the sound of heels hitting the marble floors. On que Drew fell back onto his bed.
'God… I hate mornings,' Drew thought to himself. 'First day as King and it already sucks.' Drew blocked the sun rays that were coming through the windows with his hand. "What time is it," Drew spoke out loud. 'I should've asked Solidad… ughh. What's the day of the week is it? God… Sunday? No…. I think it's Monday. Shit.' Drew let out another groan. Mondays are the worst day of the week! Laying in bed for ten minutes, the young King finally found the strength to get ready for his busy day. After a shower and brushing his teeth and getting dress, the only thing left was comb his hair that he treasure so much. His hair was his favorite thing about himself. After all that was the only thing he inherited from his mother, the Queen. He got his green eyes from his dad, along with everything else. He remembers as a young child how everyone used to tell him how much he resembles his father. Looking back he was happy when people told him that. What child wouldn't be? Telling them they look like their hero. That would make any child happy, right? But now when he looks at old family picture he can't see it anymore. The resembles between his father and him. Lost in thought Drew didn't hear the sound of heels clicking against the marble floor. It was the sound of tapping on the door that made him come back into reality. Drew made his way toward the door.
"I'm coming, I'm coming," he yelled grabbing his cloak of his coat rack that sat by the door. The knocking continued, it sounded like the knocking was getting louder and louder. "Will you please stop!? So-" the green haired boy opened the door to find it wasn't Solidad who was at the door, but Harley!
"Good morning my precious King~ Sol sent me. You better get your royal butt in gea-" The purple haired man known as Harley was cut off by the slamming of the door.
'What in Hearts name did Solidad sent him for? I know that I took more then twenty minutes but why him!' Drew said sweat dropping. He wasn't afraid of Harley or anything but you got to admit that the man is weird. There's no way the guy was straight. No way! Right? 'Great… I guess I'll escape from the window.' With a sigh Drew made his way to a window. His room was on fourth floor of the castle and there's was no way down besides climbing, jumping or flying. 'Well flying is definitely out of the question and I don't think I can jump either unless I want to fall to my death. And I don't think I have any rope,' Drew thought. Then a brilliant idea hit him.
"That's it!" Drew said walking over to his nightstand. He dig through all the junk in his nightstand's drawer when he finally came across what he was looking for, a glass flute. The glass flute was the same color as his hair. Drew gasped the flute in hand as he made his way back to the window when the knocking at the door begins again.
"You little BRA- I mean your royal Highness!" Harley voice was no longer speaking in a sweet voice like he was before, his voice was now fill with anger. "Open up! I'm not mad at you… even though you slam the door on this gorgeous face!" Harley voice was cracking as he was trying to hide his angry.
"HA! You? Gorgeous? Who are you trying to kid, you ugly drag queen?!" Drew yelled over his shoulder. 'I better get going, before he breaks the door down.'
"WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?! YOU LITTLE TWERP! I'LL GET YOU FOR THIS! MOCKING SUCH BEAUTY! I PITY YOU! YOU DON'T KNOW THE FIRST THING ABOUT LOOKS." Harley rambled on and on about how beautiful he was.
Drew placed the glass flute close to his mouth and started to play the only song he knew, The Hearts Kingdom's Royal Anthem. It's been years since he played the melody but he still knew it by heart. After he hit the last note in the song a winged creature was waiting for him outside. Drew slowly lower his flute away from his month. It took him to a few seconds to readjust.
"Flygon is that- is it really you?" The dragon type pokemon dipped his head toward his master. This made Drew smiled. It's been five years since he last saw his pokemon. He was surprised that Flygon still remembers him, after all these years of being gone! "It's good to see you again buddy." Drew reach out a hand to pet the pokemon's head. Flygon let out a cry of joy, he too miss his friend.
Bang! The sound of something went crashing down on the marble floor. It was the door! And standing on top of the door was no other then a pissed off Harley. A dark aura surrounded the purple haired man.
Without thinking, Drew Hayden jumped out the window. He was falling. He was falling fast. He closed eyes and bracing himself for the fall. But he never did. Drew opened up his eyes to find himself on Flygon's back. "Thanks Buddy. That was a close one." The dragon pokemon let out another cry but instead of joy it was the cry of relief. Drew was fully awake after that he know felt like he was going to be sick. Flygon sensing the change of emotion let a soft cry.
"I'm fine Buddy. I just need to sit down for a minute." The dragon pokemon nod his head and safely landed in the Royal court yard. Drew thanked Flygon once more for saving him and gave his winged friend a hug. Drew also promised Flygon that he would visit him later on in the day.
'Maybe I should visit my other pokemon as well,' Drew thought to himself. He didn't get a chance to see any of them yet since he got back. It wasn't like he forgot them or anything but the last couple of days been busy ones, with his crowning and all. He can't wait to see them. He also can't wait to talk to a dense brunette, who he has been meaning to talk to since the first day he came back. He only gotten a chance to talk to her two times but they were rather short conversations like: "What nice weather?" Or "Is the Earl Grey or Green tea?" And she would either respond to his question with yes or no. 'If I didn't know any better I would say she's been avoiding me. I wonder….' Out of the corner a piece of red clothing caught his eye. Drew was trying to get a better look, but a tall bushy plant blocked his view. With no luck Drew move to the next plant hoping to get a good view but there was a cactus was in his way.
The court yard was like a green house. There were all kinds of different species of plants, from flowers to trees. The plants that inhabit the court yard are from all over the world. It was Drew's own father who turned the court yard into a green house, since the green house they had was way to far away and was out dated but Drew's mother told him the main reason why was that his father love plants so much that he wanted to show others joys of a beautiful garden. He also wanted to be closer to his family and friends while tending his garden. Since his parents were dead, the court yard serves a different purpose now. The castle employees take their breaks out in the court yard during the warm months, while the pokemon enjoyed playing in the court yard all year around.
Drew pull back one of the plants to get a good view as a sweet voice fills the air of the court yard. 'What an enchanting voice,' he thought to himself. He closed his eyes as he listens to the song. The words of the song flowed well and the singer hit all notes perfectly. The song! It sounds so familiar to him but he couldn't put a finger on it. 'The song… what is the name of the song? I know I heard it somewhere before!' "Damn it," Drew cursed, realizing that said that out loud.
The singing stopped. The singer was startled by the curse. She then ran past where a certain green haired boy was hiding.
As the mysterious girl ran past him Drew didn't get a good look at the girl's face, but a fox-like creature came out the bushes and went the same way as the girl.
So what do you think? Good... bad? Your thoughts?
Should the chapter be longer or shorter? Or is it a good length?
First chapter!~ Not to shabby for my first ever publish fanfic!~ x)
Not really a fan of this first chapter though. I always find writing the first few chapters boring because you have to explain everything and also you have to get into details about the characters and 'stuff'... I don't mind writing in detail (I'm actually quite good at it), but I don't want to bore you guys to death either. ;A;
I got a question for you guys! *clears throat*
Who do you think the fox-like creature is that's following the mysterious girl? ;) (Ha! I bet half you were thinking that I was going to ask you about the mysterious girl! That question would've been too easy!)