Okay this is my first fanfiction. So be nice. Give me lots of criticism, not just flames or even those so called 'I love your story, please continue' crap. Just speak your mind. You have my permission to tear me a new one.
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Now about the story.
The timeline will be a bit skewed in favor of the x-men first class movie, but the characters of heroes will be based in their respective times. Peter will still retain his original power, because come on, the ability to absorb another power through touch while losing the one he had before is absolutely lame.
Finally, I do not own either the X-men franchise or the Heroes tv series.
There. With a quick motion of his hand, he had punched out. Working three shifts in a row was tiring, even for him. Not to mention the looks that his co-workers were giving him. Apparently, he was 'too good at his job', 'the first at every scene' and his 'over-eagerness at his job'. All this made him an outcast, even to those who originally though were his friends. But hey, he can deal with it. This isn't high school anymore. He didn't need the acceptance of his peers. He only wanted to help others. Plus having emma around kinda lessen the blow.
Changing into his normal clothes, he quickly went out of the hospital where he worked and into the back alley. Slowly breaking into a jog, he tried to get home as fast as possible.
Excuse me, Mr. Petrelli,
Curious, he turned around to see two men standing behind him. How did I miss them? Can I help you?
Yes. We would like to offer you an opportunity….
To be continued…
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