This is a new poem!!!!! Someone told me I needed to make a sequel for "Longing to be Free" but I personally think I write better poems than fics. But that's only my humble opinion.
Summary: we all know that Inuyasha gives Kagome a hard time, constantly berating her on how she's not like Kikyo and so on. Now in this poem Kagome is over Inuyasha and in love with Miroku (you wont be able to really tell but I love this pairing) but is kidnapped by Naraku. Enjoy!!
Eyes
Look into her eyes
Look into her soul
See her fire
See her pain
What you've done caused her misery and shame.
She had black hair
Until you turned it white
She had freedom
She once had a life
Until you came she had fun
She had love
Until you came all she needed came with a glove
Look into her eyes
Look into her soul…
Tada!! I think my other poem "why cry" was better, deeper though. BUT, I still like this poem.
Please review!! Give me some thing to feed my ego!! Ja ne!!