An: I came up with this idea in a psychology lesson on Freud, he came up with the ID (Innate Desire), Ego (what we are, nothing to do with thinking you own the world) and Superego. The ID is the bad and the Superego is the good.
The story is very OOC.
PROLOGUE:
Hermione's POV:
Ever since I was 5, the angel on my shoulder telling me to behave vanished I remember it like it was yesterday. I was out in the blistering cold, watching the wave's crash into the shore of the beach near my home. My parents had been arguing again, it had been helping a lot lately and I liked to get out the house when it happened as my dad got violent. I always came here when I needed to think, I liked to crawl inside the cave and pretend I was an explorer, hunting for gold. But I couldn't reach the cave tonight, the tide was in, I couldn't even venture down to the beach as the tide had covered most of the beach, and I didn't trust the rickety old piers. They weren't as safe as they used to be. Instead I was sat on one of the benches along the road side looking out across the horizon. The angel on my shoulder was telling me to go home and that my parents would have stopped arguing by now. The devil was telling me to stay and watch the stars. I liked the idea of watching the stars so I stayed.
After about half an hours, clouds appeared in the sky and the wind picked up, the waves got bigger and heavier on the shore, rain began to fall heavily but I didn't mind, I liked storms they made me feel alive. Lightning was flashing and thunder was roaring when suddenly a bolt of lightning headed straight for me and struck my left shoulder causing me to black out. I woke up the next day in hospital, my parents were crying and promised me they'd never argue again, they blamed themselves, they still do to this day. I didn't realise until a few weeks later that I no longer had the angel on my shoulder she was burnt to a crisp by the lightning. I changed since then, I no longer care about being good and staying out of trouble.
6 years later I got my Hogwarts letter I was shocked and saw this as an opportunity to rule a new world. I read up about it wanting to know everything, by this time I was a brilliant actress and I knew I had to become friends with Harry Potter and use his power to rule the world. I could then betray him and kill him, I also read about the Deatheaters and the Dark Lord and realised he might be a threat to my plans but he could also be a useful ally in my plans for ruling the world.
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