(I know I've posted this story already, but hello, that was back then...before I was good at writing and spliting sentences and blah, blah blah, well I'm back...and so is the story...
But it's a remix, same plot, same story, same EVERYTHING
but changes come. Words are changed, so are some scenes...so...Enjoy the remix and MUCH better version)
It's sad when I loved one dies, you always have a hard time baring the truth, and you always blame god for your loved ones death, but...it's not his fault. My brother didn't blame it on god, he blamed it on himself.
"Come on Al, mom can't wait all day!" Edward and Alphonse Elric stood in a grassy landscape, they had lived 11 years with there mother Trisha Elric, ever sense there father left them. Edward was the oldest brother, while Alphonse was the youngest.
Edward quickly took off running and he looked back. "Catch me if you can Al!"
Alphonse looked up and he quickly followed after, the both of them laughing happily as they played. "No fair, you got a head start!"
Edward looked back to Alphonse with a smile. "Come on, you can run faster then that...I know you can, haha."
After a long day of running around, and having fun, the two returned home. "Mom! Where home!" Edward quickly burst into the house, then he looked around. "Mom" A small gasp then escaped Alphonse's mouth and when Edward turned to look, he was shocked to see Trisha lying on the ground, in blood. Alphonse quickly began to cry, but he stopped hearing his mother's faint voice.
"Alphonse...Edward?" The two gasped, and they dropped to there mothers side, and she took there hands. "Promise me one thing..you won't EVER hurt another soul."
Alphonse quickly nodded, and more tears fell, and Trisha looked over to Edward.
"Oh Edward..."
Tears slowly filled Edward's eyes, and he hugged her. "Mom, What happen? Why are you bleeding!?"
Trisha slowly raised her hand, and she put it on Edward's cheek and she looked him in the eyes. "I love you and Alphonse..." She then slowly passed away, and Alphonse broke into deep tears.
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As a year passed, Edward and Alphonse dedicated themselves to studying Alchemy.
"I can't do it brother...it's to complicating, and what if something goes wrong?"
Edward slowly looked up to his brother sighing and he placed his book on the floor and stood.
"Listen al, I want mom back as much as you do, but if you keep doubting this will never happen, then it may not work at all."
Alphonse looked up to Edward with sadness, and Edward shared a warm smile.
"..But don't worry Al, things will be normal soon."
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Weeks later the two where down on there knees and hands, and before them was a LARGE transmutation circle and in the middle was burnt ashes and two drops of there own blood.
"Ready Al?"
Alphonse looked worriedly over to his brother and he nodded softly, and as the two placed there hands on the circle, the ashes slowly began to form a human form but before anymore could happen, the doors flew open and many military men ran in and lifted the two up, stopping the spell. "No, you can't!" As Edward struggled as he was taken away, he looked and saw the ashes fall.
"Mom!!"
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As hours passed, Edward and Alphonse lay in a dark dungeon, Hughes and Mustang standing guard.
"I don't know how to say this Roy, but this is wrong."
Mustang looked up to Hughes, fire burning in his eyes. "Would you rather have me let them die?"
Hughes blinked, then he shook his head. "Now at all sir, but, you stopped them from bringing a loved one back."
The two then began to make there way out of the room, and as they were about to leave, they were spooked by yelling and screaming, from none other then Alphonse.
"You can't keep us here! Let us out...please!"
Mustang and Hughes both looked, and Alphonse looked back with tear filled eyes.
"Please..."
Seeing the tears, Mustang smirked. "I can't do that..you where about to perform something that would have taken your life, I'm doing a favor and saving it, so you should thank me."
Suddenly, there conversation was then stopped as a scream was heard in the back of the dungeon, and when the three looked, Edward was now lying on the ground, missing an arm and leg.
"Hughes, go get a doctor..now!" Hughes nodded and he quickly took off out of the room. Mustang swung the doors open, then he shoved past Alphonse and he nealed beside Edward, examing the missing arm and leg.
"I guess we came a minute to late..."
Moments later, the doctors ran in and took Edward away, Alphonse following fast behind.
"Hmm, kids got guys..maybe I'm wrong." Suddenly, footsteps could be heard and when Mustang turned, he gasped.
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Edward now lay in bed his wounds wrapped, and at his side was dear Alphonse. "Brother..What happened?"
Edward looked up to him sadly, then he turned and looked out the window. "I guess alchemy isn't used to bring the dead back...I'm sorry."
Alphonse quietly watched Edward, and then he burst into tears. "Brother...I want mom...I want her here with us." As Alphonse cried, Edward just lay there listening.
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Come night time, the two were both fast asleep and in the hall Pinako, Winry and Hughes talked.
"The two were found about to perform forbiddin alchemy, we thought we made it in time, but then later the eldest one lost an arm and leg."
Listening, Pinako blew smoke into the air, then she closed her eyes "Don't worry Lt. Colonel, I shall fix him up."
By morning, Edward now lay in bed with a metalic arm and leg.
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"I never thought I'd see you in this position Colonel..."
Mustang smirked at the voice, as he stood there hands in pockets. "Well, I guess I was careless and I put MYSELF in this position."
As the man raised his hand to attack, Mustang did the same and there was a huge explosion, leaving the dungeon in dust. Hearing it, Hughes ran up to the mess and he gasped seeing nothing but fire.
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As Edward awoken, he looked to the side and he gasped seeing how weak his brother had become, and he quickly jumped to his feet and without thinking, he transmuted a book into a full suit of armor. As Alphonse coughed behind him, Edward bit down on his finger drawing blood, and in the head of the armor he drew a small blood seal and then after placing the head on the armor, he clapped his hands together, placed them on the armor...and Alphonse vanished.
"Huh, What...brother?"
Edward smiled softly at the armor, but then the two turned as Hughes ran into the room.
"I've got some good and bad news...the good news is, Roy wants you in the military, Bad news...he won't be here to see you join in." Hearing this, the two boys gasped and before they could say anything, Hughes soluted and left.
"Nice armor by the way kid!"
Alphonse looked down sadly, and before he could say anything, again, he noticed a book lying on the floor and he slowly picked it up. "Brother, look at this!" Edward looked up to Alphonse, then he looked to the book and his eyes grew twice there normal size, and he snatched up the book.
"This just might work..."
(well, I hope you like this one better then the last...I do, it's AWESOME, and I can actually read it better lol, the rest will be up soon)