Okay, so I'm taking a new approach on writing. An OC submission story. You people are probly either Sweet! My charater might get chosen! or God, not this again. I don't blame you. Some are written poorly. But I have gained experiance and will not fail you! The example here is my personal OC, Sophia Drake. I have three other OC's that I'll be using (of my own imagination). Credit for the format (that will be given in the next chapter) goes to wolverine15120. If you submit an OC, please have an account. It makes it so much easier. Enjoy, and Submit your OC!
Full Name: Sophia Drake
Nickname: Shadow
Age (10-18): 16
Birthday: Unable to remember.
Appearance
Eyes: Blood red. Always has an angry look to them.
Hair: silver or platinum blonde.
Body/build: Tall and big boned.
Height: about six feet tall.
Weight: Hasen't seen a scale in two years.
Nationality: caucasian
Glasses/braces/contacts/ect.: Yes. Dark sunglasses so she can see during daylight hours. Often wears a dark cloth around her eyes.
Scars/Tattoos/ect.(please explain why): Thick, black lines that are the bases for miscalaneous adaptations. She so far has created adaptations for flight, underwater travel, extra armor, and a few spare pieces for extra precaution. She often has a tail, which changes to suit her needs (ex. a mace, spines, webbing, getting thicker/thinner, becoming prehensile, etc.). Since being alone for two years, she is on the brink of insanity, and cuts herself.
Powers info
Codename: Shadow
Uniform:Black pants, loose black shirt, black combat boots, and a black cape with a hood.
Power: Manipulates shadows. Has a limited ability to teleport using shadows as portals. (optional: further down, she gets the ability to read people's souls, and learns how to posess other people's shadows.
Manifestation History: Three years ago, she realized that she was a hated 'mutant'. She pretended to go on with her normal life, but the world slowly got brighter and she started to creep in the shadows. One day, she 'stole' someone's shadow, and she freaked. Sophia managed to 'give' it back. She began exploring her powers, starting with her furniture's shadows and working from there. She became closed off from the world, precticing her power in complete secracy. She wondered if she had more to her power than just manipulation after one year of getting her power. She tried creating portals (because space is related to darkness, and time is related to light), and got stuck in some sort of shadow realm. She was there for three weeks before teleporting to her room. She packed all she could find in her room (that the investigation officers didn't take) and hurled them into her new realm. She has been living in that realm ever since, occasionally porting back to gater food. During her time in the shadow dimension, she has increased the presicion and strength in her power.
Power weaknesses (everyone has them so make at least 2): the ability to trust other people and she is deathly afraid of bright light. (Since light is the opposite of shadow, she can't find any shadows. Hence her fear of bright light.)
How did Family react to them becoming a mutant: Her family never found out. A couple months before she 'ran away', her family was sending her to therapy, and the therapist said that Sophia would be sent to a school for the emotionally disturbed, and would have constant supervision and 'support'.
Is there a History of mutants in the Family: No, but her sisters turned out to be mutants after Sophia has been at Xavier's School for a year.
Bio
History: Before the manifestation of her powers, Sophia was a quiet teenager that enjoyed being by herself. She had few freinds, and didn't respond well to being in crowds. Her mother entered her in a beauty pagent once when she was little, and Sophia learned how to be a great speaker. She was never a bad student, just an under achiever. Sophia retains some information better if she does things witn her hands. Has memorized some useless facts, but really can't retain information well.
Personality: Quiet, introverted, shy, nervous, and a kleptomatic.
Birthplace: Somewhere in Florida. Never really asked for details.
Hometown: A small town outside of Tampa, but you've probly never heard of it.
Favorites
Color: Black, silver, red, and purple.
Music: New rock, dubstep, and any other song that has a meaning to real life and is fast paced.
Band: Has multiple, but prefers Linkin Park the most.
Animal: Dragons, lizards, bats, spiders, and cats.
Song: The Good Left Undone by Rise Against, Light Pollution by Stephan Walking, Through Darkness by ARNEJ, and Lies of the Beautiful people by Sixx AM.
Book: Mainly reads fiction, favors the Harry Potter and Percy Jackson series.
Sport: Isn't really into sports.
Food: Anything salty, sweet, and/or bitter.
Most prized possession: A photograph of her family. It's been torn, stained, and folded many different times.
School/Mansion info
Grade (5th - 12th): 10th
Academic Level (how do they do in school): fairly well, but is an under acheiver.
Favorite Subject: anything were she doesn't have to do a lot of physical exersize.
Roommate (2 to a room give me the name of the other Oc's): Which ever fits.
Friends at Mansion: None really
Enemies at Mansion: None really
How much of a trouble maker are they (explain a bit and rate 1-10, 1 being never cause any problems): 7. Sophia is too stubborn for her own good. She often finds out how to do things her own way and doesn't change it.
Anyone at the Mansion that they look up too: She doesn't really look up to anyone.
Other
Fears: Light.
Skills: Sculpting and music. She intends to be an artist when she grows up.
Bad Habits: Nervously taps out rythms, twitches slightly, Bites her nails, and grinds her teeth together.
Likes: Fast music, jokes, darkness, sculpting, and drawing. Will never admit it, but she obsesses over My Little Pony and can name all the characters on the spot.
Dislikes: Bubbly people, attention seekers, dogs, and bright light.
Hobbies/Habits/Activities: Creating music and art, questioning life, philosiphying
Clothes: Wears all black, silver jewelry, and has her hair up in a low ponytail with long bangs.
Casual Outfit 1: A black v-neck t-shirt, with a black unzipped hoodie and long black skinny jeans. has a hole cut in the back of the jeans for her tail, which changes to suit her needs. Silver owl earings with a black necklace that has a tarnished silver claw.
Casual Outfit 2: Red aviator goggles with a black turtleneck. Black vest. Black jeans with tears at the knees. Black frather earrings and a grey ribbon tied around her wrist. A hole in the back of her pants for her tail to go.
Winter: Black t-shirt with three red slashes across the front. Long black overcoat. Dark jeans. Black snowboots. Black cat earings and a ring that is in the shape of a crocodile.
Summer:Black long sleeve shirt, black fingerless gloves. Black capris, and black sandals. wears purple nailpolish on her toes and chipped, sparkly black nail polish on her fingernails. Has a hole in the back of her capris for her tail.
Spring: Similar to Summer, but she wears a black unzipped hoodie. The back of her shirt is slashed so she can have draconic wings.
Fall: Similar to summer, but wears black pants.
Swimsuit: Sophia wouldn't be caught dead in one. But when she needs to swim, she'll wear her clothes while swimming.
Pj's: A grey t-shirt with black sweat pants.
Formal Wear: A modest black dress that comes down to her knees. It has a small v-neck and goes over both of her shoulders. Sophia also wears a silver necklace with a bright silver dragon on it. Her earings are silver dragon wings.
Other Questions
Do they have a cell phone: No, has never seen the use of one.
What car or vehicle does your OC drive (if they can drive): Flies using her wings.
Anything Special about Him/Her?: Sophia rarely cries. When she does, her tears are red, and it's something serious ( extream pain, death, etc.)
Power Scene (REQUIERED): (Please use good punctuation and grammer.)
In a dark part of the woods, close to the Rocky mountians, a mysterious figure clothed in black stood. In front of her was a creature that should never exist. A raptor like bird poised to attack was in the clearing. The stars twinkled in the sky, as if mocking the battle that was about to take place. The human looking one spoke.
"We can make this easy or hard, your choice." The human looking one hissed in a feminen voice.
The raptor bird screamed and attacked. The girl seemed to conjour up a black sheild before her befor the raptor bird. The animal dodged it, and lept on the girl. Her face was bathed in moonlight, clearly too pale to be healthy, and grunted in pain. A black bandanna covored her eyes.
The raptor brought it's beak close to the girl's face. It's breath smelled like every rotting carcass it has ever eaten. The girl gave a small smile. The bird gave a puzzled look, and screamed with intence pain.
The girl had a thick, muscled kangaroo-like tail. At the end if the tail was a thin, pointy spine, covored in blood. It warped and melded into a thick mace and proceeded on bashing the bird off the girl. Several sharp cracks reverberated from each hit, breaking several ribs.
The raptor lept away, and took to the skies, thinking that it was safe. A crinckling of leather showed how wrong it was. Flapping steadily behind it was the girl. Paniced, it flapped as hard as it could. A *fwisk* was heard, and the raptor gave it's final scream as it fell, spiraling down into the forest. The girl was hovoring over the raptor's death site, Her bandanna lost in the chase.
Her blood red eyes glowed with an angry lust, lust for another battle that will have to wait until twilight.
The sun was rising, and she knew it would be disaterous if she stayed out any longer.
TL;DR
Don't blame you. Basically, the outline is in the next chapter, and this is my OC. Please have an account before you submit.
Keep on Keeping on!