-1Zx: Ok, this is what was going through my head to start with, but I worded it completely wrong. So I am re-writing the first 5 chapters of the story. I know it was really, really cheesy, so this time around I am providing a little more backstory to the characters, and a little more explanation. To the others who have already read this, I'm sorry I'm suddenly switching it up. But I have matured my creativity and I hope you can forgive the early chapters' crapiness. I may post the old chapters soon, but it will be a while, trust me. Also, the comedy won't be as common(that's probably a good thing).
5 years after the events of KH2…
Sora was flying through the galaxy in a brand new gummi ship, a Feignnus(Basically, a flying Ferrari).He was now in his 20's, with silver clothes and a collection of Keyblades he had earned during the war[ Attention: I will be making a spinoff concerning this. . He had seen many battles, and was flying back to Traverse to see Kairi and his friends. He and Kai were now engaged, so if he didn't come, well I don't even have to say anything there. Anyway, his news wasn't all great. Donald and Goofy had been taken hostage in the middle of the war, and no one has heard from them since. He flew by where the world should be. "No way" he said, "I've got to have the wrong coordinates". He checked his notebook for the coordinates. They were right.
"Ok, fine. You win. NaV, set course for Radiant Garden."
All heck had literally broken loose in Radiant Garden. Houses were burning, People were also on fire, but only a few of them. Most were barricaded in the buildings that couldn't be burned. Soldiers were raiding the village. During the war, the worlds established an order to ally with one another. Now, the Alliance, as it's known, is corrupted, and the soldiers are allowed to do anything they please. "Something's not right about these soldiers…They keep falling over…" he said as he ran down into the residential area.
There was a protective field around the house. All of the other houses on the block were destroyed. For some reason he wasn't able to penetrate the shield. Just as he was about to call Merlin to let him in, and fast, he heard a sound from behind him.
RAHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zx: Not sure why I put that in there, but who cares. I will republish Chapter 2 sometime before the 25th(Halo 3, duh!). If I am not on, send a review! If I am, send a review!
