this is my first mystery dungeon fic.
Rewritten...
Disclaimer: I don't own anything
"ugggggghhhhhhh," a boy says.
"Wh-here am I."
"I hear water... am I at a beach?'"
The beach is the most beautiful thing in the world of water is calm, the wind is calm, and the krabby are blowing their bubbles. There is also a body near the water. It's light yellow with an orange ear. The Pokemon has blue eyes and a tail that look like wings.
"I can't remember what happened... Come to think of it, I can't remember anything at all," The mysterious pokemon says starting to panic. "The only thing I do remember is my name is Kamil and that I'm a human. I better get up and wash up," Kamil says as he starts to get up.
When he finishes he looks at his reflection in the water and cries out in surprise.
"AAAAAHHHHHH.I-I-I've turn into a Pokemon," Kamil says
Then he hears some rustling behind him.
"Huh," He says as he turns around.
"He-hello," a voice says from the bushes.
"Who-who are you," Kamil asks.
"I'm Zynx the riolu," replied the voice as it came out.
Kamil eyes widen when he saw the riolu now known as Zynx come out of the bushes. This one was clearly a female because of her voice. She was sky blue all over except for her collar,forehead and 'ears' which were black. Kamil was in a trance-like state when he looked into her eyes. She started to giggle which snapped Kamil out of his trance like state.
"My names Kamil," He introduced himeself.
"Hi Kamil," Zynx then had a sad face.
"What's wrong," Kamil asked fearing he said something wrong.
''O-oh nothings it's nothing... It's just that I want to join the exploration team guild, but I'm just to much of a chicken to do it."
"Maybe I could help," Kamil suggested.
"Re-really?You'll help me," She asked.
"Yeah sure. I still need to find why I became a Pokemon," Kamil said.
"Huh? Become a human... you look like an ordinary Victini to me," Zynx asked puzzled.
"Yeah. I'm not a pokemon. I'm actually a human," Kamil answered.
"What?You don't look like one," Zynx said skeptically.
"Well I used to be," He replied glumly.
Zynx then felt guilty for doing that.
"It's just that it's unheard of that could happen," Zynx said trying to cheer him up.
"Don't worry. I'm sure we'll figure it out," Kamil said as they started to walk to the guild.
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