For those of you who have already read my next two chapters might want to skim through all the chapters again because there was a fairly big hole in my story so I pulled it off the site but since its back with the hole mended I request forgiveness by posting the 4th chapter tonight as well so please don't hurt me Disclaimer I don't own naruto
(personal notes these may get annoying very fast )
"character thoughts"
"character dialogue"
SFX
Chapter 1: so troublesome!
Team seven's day started pretty normally, Naruto and Sasuke sparred(more like a death match) as Sakura watched her 'dear Sasuke' while kakashi was seemingly reading his icha icha paradise and (bet you would never guess) Hinata was hiding behind a tree watching the boy she admired, Naruto.
"Oh, Naruto what do I have to do to have you notice me? To become stronger? To be ..."
"you know Hinata if you want I'm sure that Naruto will be happy to train with you if you asked him although sometimes it seems like suicide."
kakashi had appeared behind her already in a sentence but she had already fainted(what a surprise, heh bet I'm already annoying you with all these little messages sorry) by how surprised she was and was only standing up because she'd been leaning on a tree.
"Hinata?" kakashi said because she hadn't responded him
kakashi leaned forward and tapped Hinata's shoulder and was surprised by her response of falling over, he grabbed her before she hit the ground. He sighed and sat her down next to a tree and thought
" Hinata the Hyuuga child said to be the weakest of the clan. I see how they would think
that, she'd just passed out because I snuck up on her ... but, I remember when she fought Neji at the chuunin preliminaries. If she trained more instead of ..."
CRASH
"Well I should hurry back before the fight is over or else naruto wont stop whining about me missing the fight."
(to the fight after kakashi left)
The two battling genin were sweating through their clothes. Sasuke had a kunai out while Naruto was making a kage buushin(Shadow clone).When they charged at each other Naruto attacked first with himself performing a roundhouse kick(chuck Norris rules) and his clone doing a sweep kick, Sasuke jumped making him body parallel to the ground. Just then another Naruto came out from behind his clone and gave Sasuke a strong, firm, hard . . . kick to the chest(had you going there for a second huh?) sending Sasuke flying several meters away from naruto and his clones when Naruto yelled.
"How did you like my hidden third leg Tai-jutsu!?!"
Naruto laughing at his dirty pun while Sakura, on the other hand wanted to kill him for saying that but knew that interrupting Sasuke's match would anger him so instead she yelled.
"SASUKE-KUN FINISH THIS SHRIMP OFF PLEASE I CAN'T STAND HIM ANYMORE!"
Naruto was hurt by this because she was cheering for Sasuke and not him, She'd called him a shrimp, and that she said 'I can't stand him anymore' but not even that could make his eyes look away from Sasuke who was now preparing the chidori, Naruto sighed and thought.
"Come on Sasuke-Kun, you can't expect to win by just using chidori everytime people say I'm dense and even I know the flaw of that move well for you at least."
Naruto's two clones lined up to his left then both he and Sasuke were running at each other. Several seconds before they collided the Naruto clone on the left grabbed the middle clone while he did the same to the original, and left clone swung the two Narutos into a circular motion and before Sasuke could come to a complete stop (because of the momentum he requires to use chidori in case you forgot) Naruto was flung towards Sasuke's back knocking him down forcing the chidori to form a small hole which Sasuke was now laying in with Naruto sitting on his back already in a sentence saying.
"Come on Sasuke you gotta get some new moves eventually your foes will know how to beat your attacks"
"Tch ... why didn't you use Rasengan you had a clear hit didn't you?"
"Ugh, Baka(idiot) you just got out of the hospital because of that fight with gaara(from the chuunin exam) and that thing with Itachi I wasn't about to send you back with rasengan. If you want don't' think of it as me being nice instead say I didn't want to uh... halter your training "that was close""
"whatever just get ..."
"NARUTO GET YOUR DIRTY LITTLE ASS OF SASUKE-KUN!!!" Sakura screamed and before Naruto could react Sakura sent Naruto flying about 10 yards away.
Sakura tried helping Sasuke up but he brushed her off and started to walk away. As Naruto was getting up from the punch to the face when kakashi came out of the forest. kakashi sighed as soon as he saw only Naruto which meant the fight had already ended.
"kakashi-Sensai!" Yelled Naruto with a happy but disappointed look
"You missed the fight didn't you? You're always somewhere else when I win!"
"Really? You know that bruise on your face tells a different story."
"Oh this?" Naruto said while rubbing where Sakura had hit him.
"Sakura punched me because I was sitting on Sasuke's back"
"Really now? Well in that case good job. As for me I'm gonna go pass by the Hokage's office. See you later Naruto." Kakashi said while mockingly performing lee/guy's nice guy pose and then disappearing in a puff of smoke.
"Well I guess I'll go train my speed after all to beat Sasuke I have to keep up with him." Naruto then jumped into the forest to train. As he was training he saw a figure slumped against the base of a tree and wondered what that was. When he got face to face with the figure he saw that it was Hinata.
"Huh, Hinata? Are you OK?" Naruto said while lightly shaking her, but she wouldn't wake up.
"Well I guess I'll wait for her to wake up since I wont take her to a hospital, I hate that place."
Naruto took a seat next to Hinata
"Heh, I guess Shikamaru was right, women can be so ...
(Konoha Streets)
"Come on Sasuke-kun please! Just tonight please, please, please, please." Sakura whined
"Damn this girl can be so annoying I already have a headache from Naruto beating me now she wont stop following me ... and I can't believe I'm going to give in to her whining!"
"Alright but just tonight and you'd better stop annoying me since I said yes!" said Sasuke in a fairly angry tone.
"Oh thank you Sasuke-kun, I promise you wont regret this" Yelled Sakura in a gleeful tone despite being several inches away from him and before the skipped away she whispered
"Sasuke please wear something nice I don't wanna be the only one"
"I can't believe it !.. Shikamaru was right women are so ...
... Troublesome!" (naruto and sasuke's thoughts)
even though this is the first chapter I always life reading it well anyways sorry again for those of you who have already read this and the next two chapters in their original form but reading them again will make the story make a lot more sense. As before I urge you to review and until next time ja ne.