"This Time"

Hey guys! I was feeling a bit bored with my last story and I'm experiencing some writer's block at the moment, but a couple months ago I saw the movie "August Rush" and instantly fell in love with it! It inspired me to write this story, but I thought I'd just go ahead and write a trailer for it as my first chapter so you guys could let me know if I should continue on with it or not. Please review and tell me what you think! :) Thanks.

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TRAILER -

Shows Evan swaying around in a field, listening to the sounds around him and creating a melody out of it.

I believe in music…the way that some people believe in fairy tales…What I hear came from my mother and father.

Shows Troy and Gabriella sitting together on a rooftop.

Once upon a time, they fell in love.

"What are you looking at?" Gabriella asks Troy.

"You." Troy leans in and kisses her.

Shows Troy and Gabriella sleeping together in each other's arms, Gabriella wakes up.

"I have to go." She grabs her things.
"Let me walk you home."
"No..It's complicated."
She runs away.

Shows a pregnant Gabriella with her dad at a restaurant.

"Listen to me, you have to give that baby up."

"Dad.."

Shows Gabriella running out of the restaurant, then gets hit by a car.

"Gabriella!"

Shows Gabriella sleeping in a hospital bed, then she wakes up and looks at her father.

"I'm sorry..he's gone."

Shows Gabriella crying herself to sleep.

But somewhere inside me, I know that they always wanted me.

Shows Gabriella screaming at her father.

"Where is he?!" Gabriella cries.

Shows Troy running after a taxi cab, looking for Gabriella.

"GABRIELLA!"

Shows a social worker with Evan at an orphanage.

"How long have you been here?" The social worker asks Evan.
"Eleven years and sixteen days—I've been counting."

The music, I thought if I could play it, they would know I was alive… and find me.

Shows Evan talking to his friend at the orphanage.

"We're never gonna see our parents again." Evan's friend tells him.

"If they don't find us, we'll just have to go find them."

Shows Troy looking at a picture of him and Gabriella from the party, when they first met.

"What's the point of playing? She's not gonna hear me." He says to himself.

Shows Gabriella walking into the orphanage.

"I need to find my son." Gabriella tells the lady at the orphanage.

"Name?"

"…I don't know."

Shows Gabriella talking to the social worker.

"Why is it so important that you want him now?" he asks Gabriella.

"I've always wanted him."

It's like someone's calling out to me, with the music.

Shows Gabriella talking to Sharpay on the phone.

"I know it sounds crazy, but I can hear him! I swear I can hear him!"

Shows the social worker giving a picture of Evan to Gabriella.

"This is him."

The music… It's all around us.

All you have to do, is listen.


Alright so if I get enough reviews I'll post the next chapter up next week, at least. I just want to know if you guys think that I should continue on with this story or not. :) So please review!