Hi frnds ! I have long been a silent reader and reviewed under the name of "Sangiti" in many of your stories bt nw dat I have completed class 12 I have permission to join FF . this is my first story forgive my mistakes and pls review…. I hope my idol DF di will my dear frnd do review.
SCENE-1
A dark room, two men are talking –
Person 1- Pure 3 din ho gaye ise ulta latakte huye phir bhi ek shabd nahi bola. Insan hai ya kuch
aur.
Person 2- Ha Boss yeh baat toh hai. Par aur zyada is ease nahi rakh sakte , kahi mar gaya toh.
Person 1 (BOSS) – Tujhe iski badi fikar ho raha hai . Aur hamara joh nuskan ho raha hai uska kya re Raju ?
Person 2 (Raju) - Sorry Boss par agar yeh mar gaya toh hume hamara information kabhi nahi milega.
Boss – Ha yeh bhi thik hai . Chal ek akhri baar koshish karte hai nahi toh koi aur tarika nikal na hoga.
They move forward . A man is hanging upside down with his legs tied to a rod in the ceiling. Numerous bruises are lined on his body, his eyes are closed. There is no sign of the immense pain he is feeling on his face.
Raju- Abe uth, ase latakte huye bhi tujhe neend aa raha hai? (laughs)
No reaction from the hanging man this angers boss.
Boss – Yeh ase nahi manega . Mera whip lao, ise abhi sabak sikhata hu.
A man brings Boss his whip. Boss starts whipping the man, he flinches in pain still no sound comes from his mouth.
Boss- Har roz 20 se 30 bar yeh whip tumhari body ko chirta rehta hai phir bhi tum hume who info dene k liye tyaar nahi ho. Ajeeb admi ho ….(thinks for sometime) Thik hai ab kuch naya khel khela jaye tumhare saath ab mai bhi isse bore ho gaya hu.
Two men assisting boss removes the hanging man from support and places him at the corner of the room on the floor. After he realizes the men and Boss has left He opens his eyes. He moves in order to adjust himself and a painful scream escapes his chapped lips.
Man- Ahhhhhhhhhh….Abhiiiiiiiiiiii
He realizes his buddy cannot save him from this situation for he might have been kept far away from Mumbai, His city.
A voice whispers in his ears from a long flown past time seeming close as he tries to relieve the moment.
Flashback starts:
Abhijeet- Aaj toh tune kamal kar diya Daya. Kya khana banaya hai.
Daya – ha, toh kyat um mujhe itna nalayak samajte ho.
Abhi – Are nahi yaar mei toh …..me tera tariff kar raha hu aur tu ukhra jar aha hai…
Daya- (naughtily) Phas gaye na boss mei toh bas majak kar raha tha…aur tum sach samaj baithe.
Abhi (with fake anger) – Daya tu kabhi apni harkato se baaj nahi ayega…..(after pause) ….kabhi ana bhi
mat.
Flashback Over:
Daya (Man) remembers that he had his last morsel of food 5 days ago, after which he is surviving on a single glass of glucose solution which he is given every day to keep his body alive to withstand more torture.
He closes his eyes to absorb the pain of which he is made.
Author's Note :- Why is Daya being tortured ? what info these people want? Will abhi be able to save him? Plss review so that I can know of your views and suggestions and improve my story.
Take care ~ Diva.