To the people who have read this story this far... I'm overjoyed... When I first put this story on I couldn't get anyone to look at it. It makes me excited to see at least a handful of people like my idea.
Anyways... The reason for this blurb... I am going to completely remodel this story, using the same plot/ideas/characters/theme and hopefully make it more readable and less vomit worthy... I only ask two things... (1) Please be patient as my only source of posting comes from my phone and therefore the chapters will be written in my notes (2) please review... If you like the story, tell me! If it sucks and needs to be thrown away, tell me! I love constructive criticism! It becomes depressing when you attempt a story and no one comments...
Done complaining now.
Anyways, for those of you who enter this story, follow it if you like it cause it will (hopefully) get a whole lot better (and more active) here soon.
Oh, as an after-note, I have recently joined a Hunger Games 24/24 Collaboration called Troubled Souls. Check it out if you're interested. We need more people. You can find it by PMing 24 with 24, CelticGames4, The Tributes from Two, and InfiniteFinity or visiting the Forum Troubled Souls: 24 Tributes and 24 Authors.