A/N
Hi guys! It's me RoseDust101! And boy am I excited to publish the first chapter of this story!
But first, let me explain something.
In order to keep the Nyotalia characters right I decided to only describe them vaguely.
Why?
Because of the fact that not all Nyotalia characters have been designed yet so to prevent confusion I decided to put up a link to the designs of the Hetalia and Nyotalia characters.
I will also try to stay away from describing the characters and areas in great detail unless it's absolutely necessary, no, not because I'm lazy, but so that way those who are reading can put in their own background and outfits into the story based on the information given. It also helps to keep the Nyotalia characters without designs for the readers to put in. It'll also help avoid the very common plot splice that can be caused by paragraphs that describe a person or area and make the reader suddenly forget what's going on in a story as they are reading it. It's happened to me and I feel like this compromise will not only help me update faster but keep the from going off the plot.
So, enjoy.
Nyotalia characters- . ?title=Nyotalia
Hetalia Characters- wiki/List_of_Hetalia:_Axis_Powers_characters
"Ve~! Germany!" A man with a curl on the right side of his head exclaimed to the tall, blond haired man ahead of him. "I'm tired~."
"Italy if you're going to get strong you have to at least make one more lap around town!" Germany said loudly to the lagging Italian.
"But I'm hungry!"
Meanwhile a few girls were hanging out with a Japanese man, one of them looked a lot like Germany, another looked like Italy and the last one looked like a girl version of the Japanese man. The four were sitting in a circle, chatting.
The German girl leaned back to look at Germany and Italy, although she was looking at them up-side-down because of the way she was leaning back she could clearly see that the Italian was having trouble running.
She sighed, "Those two are still training? I thought that they would be done by now…"
"Hai. Germany-san seems to be having trouble…" The Japanese girl said.
The girl sat up strait again, "Ja. Feliciana may be slow but… At least she a little faster."
"I had a lot of practice!" Feliciana exclaimed, "Italy is always all over the place so I often have to run around to find him. Especially when he gets lost, well… When I'm not lost myself…"
"Don't you both get lost whenever you can't find each other?" The german girl said, "I mean, when you're hanging out, at least one of you loses the other one out of three times."
"That's mean Monica!" Feliciana exclaimed.
"Please don't start shouting at each other now!" Sakura pleaded.
"Ve?" Italy stopped running and looked at the group. "Ve…?"
"ITALY!"
"Ah! Sorry Germany!"
"Great job Anneliese. We're lost." A girl with long silver hair and a scar on her left cheek said.
"Nononono! I've got this Julchen…" Anneliese exclaimed as they walked the stone streets of a town.
"Oh come on we're in the town square! At this rate I'll never get to training…"
"Maybe you should have gone to training with your sister…"
"YOU'RE THE ONE WHO SUGGESTED THAT I GO THERE WITH YOU!"
Monica looked around impatiently and then stood up. "Well, it's no use waiting for my sister right now, lets start training…"
"Ah!" Feliciana exclaimed. She pulled on Monica's jacket. "Oh come on Monica! Let's wait a few more minutes before we run I bet she's almost here!"
"Nein. She can join us when she gets here."
"B-But I don't wanna run!" Feliciana wined.
"Feliciana! We are running now!" Monica shouted.
Feliciana moaned and stood up reluctantly, her and Monica walked to the place they were going to run.
Sakura stood up and bowed to Japan. "I should get going too brother. Thank you for keeping us company."
"It was my honor Sakura." Japan replied.
Sakura walked to the road the three were going to run on.
"Alright, lets go. I want to catch up with my bruder." Monica exclaimed.
Little did she know that her brother and Italy were a yard behind them.
Feliciana, however, did.
"Alright… Lets-" Monica looked behind her to find Feliciana running to the two boys at rapid speed. "FELICIANA!"
"Come on Fratello!" Feliciana darted past Germany and grabbed her brother. Forcing him to run as fast as her.
"GAHHHH!" Germany shouted in surprise as Feliciana ran away with her brother. "I-ITALY!"
The two kept running, or, more accurately Feliciana was forcing her brother to run with her by keeping hold of him while he begged for her to slow down and to stop, while saying other gibberish along with it.
"Hey get back here!" Germany shouted.
Monica held him back by patting his shoulder.
Germany looked at his sister.
"…"
"…"
"…"
"…"
"Fifteen euros they run into Julchen." Monica said simply.
"Huh?" Germany looked at her like she was crazy.
"I'll take that bet." Japan said.
"HEY! DON'T BET OVER SOMEONE'S WELL-BEING!" Germany exclaimed.
"Not again…" Sakura sighed nervously.
A/N: Okay, I know you guys are going to be a bit confused on why this chapter is a training session but I can, in fact, explain.
The first few chapters are going to be what the countries relationship with their Nyotalia selves (AKA their brothers and/or sisters.) is like. In other words these next few chapters are going to be part of the main focus throughout this story, for it'll not only give you an idea of what the relationships are like but give much more emotional depth in the characters and the plot. This makes it so the reactions are understandable.
However, there will be another series that will basically be drabbles about their relationships with each other as well, but, even though those will be important to have a complete understanding of this fanfiction, will make this section of the story way too long. So those will be published separately.
See you guys next chapter!
Edit 3/17/13: If you guys got an update I'm super sorry but Chapter 2 isn't up yet, I'm still figuring out how this site works. ^^;
