Okay, I'm a new writer to this site so don't burn be to much. Also this is my story from Quizilla, I just decided to move it here because not many people were reading it. The first few chapters are in the second person and very crappy so feel free to burn me on the ones that aren't in third person. Also, many ideas from this story came from suggestions by toodark so thank you!
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Prolouge
The servant girl ran. Through the raining paved streets she ran. Her black tunic clinging to her body as she ran. Her white hooded cloak slapping against her legs yet protecting the young child she held within her arms. She ran with the sleeping child away from the dark clouds looming over the castle. A lone figure leaned against one of the shop's doorframe's waiting for the girl. "Your..(huff)..Majesty" the girl gasps out as her hood falls back revealing black hair that clung to her face from the rain. The woman pulled back the purple hood covering her face. As she did her dark red locks fell around her face. "I'm so sorry for not getting here quick enough Queen-" but the queen placed a finger over the girl's mouth to silence her."Time is of the essence. Quickly take my daughter and leave." she said nodding to the child in the girl's arms."You were right I shouldn't have tried so hard to make Linnara one of the princesses' of hearts. I should have listened. But now it is too late. Hurry. I may not be able to save my kingdom, but my other daughter does not deserve to share the same fate of a family that shunned her more then the kingdom itself did." The queen had taken on a hurt look as she said these words. "But never mind that now! Hurry! before the shadow Beasts notice her absence. GO!" with that the queen drew her hood back on and ran off into the night. The servant girl notice the presence of a shadow beast drawing nearer. She quickly used what strength she saved and opened a dark portal that lead anywhere but here. Flying through the darkness the servant held the child tightly fearing what might happen to it if she let go. The portal deposited the two on a beach facing a rather large island. The sound of footsteps promote her to hide in the shadows waiting for them to pass. Two young boys run past. One with short silver hair and blue eyes while the other had very short spiky brown hair and bright blue eyes. They ran down to the boats tied to the dock. She assumed they were headed down to the island. //But why in the dead of night?//she thought. As if for an answer a meteor shower began. She turned towards the inside of the island and saw a cozy little town. //This place is perfect she'll fit right in.//she snuck into the square and laid her cloak on the ground in front of a house and laid the child on it. "I'm afraid you can't be allowed to remember anything." Saying that she placed her hand over the girl's forehead. Her hand lifted as a white marble with a pink star in it floated out. she picked up the marble. we're giving you a chance to live another life your lucky