This is the first fanfiction story I've ever written, so please give me some feedback. It's inspired by the song "Somebody's Baby."
The characters are all human. Emmett and Bella are brother and sister, Alice is Bella's best friend, and Rosalie, Jasper, and Edward are all brothers and sister.
Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer is the creator of all things Twilight. I am not attempting to make any kind of profit by borrowing her characters.
BPOV
Emmett was bartending tonight, thank goodness. While I knew no one would bother me much anyway, I just felt safer if he was there. All the customers knew he was my big brother, thanks to his scaring off a really rude drunk that had been hitting on me one night about a year ago. Now, nobody was anything but nice.
"Hey, Bella!"
"Hey, Em! How're tricks?"
"Very funny. Rose will be here soon, she wants to teach you how to play darts."
I shuddered at the idea. Me, play darts? I can barely stay upright, I'm so clumsy. It'd be a great idea to give me a sharp missile to throw. Seeing my reaction, Emmet just grinned. He was convinced that his girlfriend would be the one to turn me into a girly-girl, or at least someone who didn't need to be hospitalized every other week.
I requested my "usual," a cranberry juice without any vodka. People don't want to come into a bar and see others not drinking, so I tried to help keep up appearances by ordering something vague. Then I went to the jukebox and put on my song.
EPOV
"Rose, we haven't seen you in forever. We're here less than a day and you dragging us to a bar so you can see you're boyfriend?"
I swear, my cousin I a pain in the ass. Neither Jasper nor I have been down in over a year, and all she wants us to do is meet her boyfriend. We can't spend any time catching up before we're all out partying.
"Guys, I'm sorry, but he's important to me. Besides I promised I'd hang out with his little sister while he's working tonight. He worries about her being there while everybody else gets drunk."
Jasper sighed, the battle won. He's never been won to allow a possible damsel-in-distress situation pass him by. I gave in as well, knowing that we'd at least see Rose caring about someone besides herself tonight, for a change.
"As long as you take less than an hour to get ready, we'll go."
"Thank you, Edward!" She gave me a hug, then disappeared into her bedroom to change. Jasper and I looked at each other, shrugged, then went to get some food.
BPOV
As "Somebody's Baby" came over the loudspeakers, I heard Alice coming up behind me. "You play that song every time you come in here. Why?"
"Because it's my song, silly. The lyrics fit me."
"So you're waiting for someone to realize that you're his baby? Anybody in mind?"
I shook my head. "That's just it Alice. I haven't met him yet."
