The Circus of Fall

I don't own 'My Little Ponies'

"Word"… Speaking

"Word"… Singing

Word… Actions Happening

Their is a music theme that goes with it. Look for the MLP song 'The Vote' for when Diamond Tiara is singing. Just ignore her voice and you should know what type of music is playing when the song starts.

(Seen in the Reader's point of view)


Ahead of you, there are three little foals entering a circus tent. A few moments later, you hear a terrified scream. You rush in after them only to see nopony there. Then you spot an Earth pony appear in your range of vision. He has a creepy grin on his face and he starts singing a moment later.

"Welcome, come one

And come all,

Come over and see

My circus of Fall!"

The pony starts hoping around you. You notice that his mane and coat seem to move higher with each jump, even though he hasn't jumped any higher than when he started.

"Bring you friends

Over and see

No need to worry

Admission is free"

The background has faded to black, yet you and the strange pony can still be seen. Suddenly, you scream, for the skin on this pony had just been thrown off of him. What you see now is the skeleton of a pony with green eyes jumping around you.

"In my circus

You're in for a blast

Try not to leave

Let us make it last!"

A shining light catches your eye. A way out! You start running towards it as the skeleton can still be heard singing.

"In my circus

Try not to frown

For you never know

What is around."

A glowing green clown with fanged teeth and claws suddenly jumps in front of you as two ghosts fly in overhead. You turn to the side and continue running as they start to chase you. Suddenly, the skeleton's skull flies past you without its body as it continues to sing.

"Won't you stick around

And look at all you can see

You'll have a BLAST

Playing by the trees"

Suddenly, you find yourself outside in front of a big tree. Then, once more you scream, for two eyes have opened up on the tree alongside a mouth that screeches at you. It pulls its roots out of the ground as its branches try to grab you. You duck out of the way and run back the way you think you came from. You hear giant stops that tell you that the monster tree is chasing you. Then, once more everything but you,and the skeleton's giant floating skull that is still singing, fades to black.

"What's with the face-"

You try to get away only to find your path is blocked by the ghosts from before.

"Is something wrong?"

You turn in a second direction only to find the evil clown blocking that route.

"Don't you worry for-"

You turn around to the third direction only to find THAT route blocked by the monster tree from earlier.

"the dying won't be for long!"

You dash in the last direction available only to be stopped after a few feet by a cage. The monsters surround you as autumn leaves explode out behind them. You shiver and prepare for the end. Then all the monsters start to sing.

"Don't you know

That it's alright

This is just a show

For Nightmare Night!

AH HA HA HA!"

Suddenly, as the monsters start to laugh, the lights turn on and you can see the ghosts hanging on some trapezes, the tree monster is now made of paper, the evil clown looks like a normal clown now, and the skeleton is turning back into the earth pony that you saw when you first entered the tent. You also see the three foals you saw enter the tent completely fine and laughing with the circus crew.


The descriptions of my OCs will be in the next chapter. I would like for someone to remake this story and have the Mane 6 and the Cutie Mark Crusaders in place of the readers. Send me a PM to inform me that you want to and get more in depth details that you fell that you need.