Disclaimer; The Wonderful J K Rowling owns the world and characters of Harry Potter, I've just borrowed them, altered them and mostly probably ruined them !
A/n This is adark one very much of canon , swearing and death of a minor , so be warned
"Fucking bastard betrayer "swore James Potter, cursing the man who had once been one of his closest friends, his secret keeper. So angry, annoyed at the man. James flung a violent curse at the man; the man who was hiding behind the most hated wizard there was and most probably ever had, Voldemort. Voldemort blocked the curse as easily as breathing was to most people and just leered back at him, laughing, and such a twisted, evil thing on that deformed snake like face of his.
"Tsk Tsk Potter such language, and you with a bay in the house."
James couldn't help himself, as he lashed out with curses and counter-curses, he twisted his head slightly to look up the stairs of their home at Godrick's hollow where Lilly had gone to try and save Harry. That second of inattention was all that it took, as the killing curse slammed in to his body, throwing the now lifeless corpse backwards.
Voldemort continued up the stairs, James now completely forgotten, apart from his inconvenient positioning on the stairs, his object of attention now only a door away. Pointing his wand at solid wooden door , it was just quick spell that blasted it of its hinges allowing him and his pet , Wormtail to enter the little bedroom , lily standing in front of the cot containing the baby .
Before she could react Voldemort had disarmed her of her wand, stamping on it as it landed at her feet.
She stared into his eyes, and started to beg "please, he's a baby, what has he done, what can he do to you? " He replied with a grin, evil humour displayed on his features. "The prophesy, my dear, now move aside, I promised no harm to you "
"Please, I'll take him far away, and bring him up without magic, he'll never even know of you, never is a threat."
The Dark lord was sighed and lowered his wand a little, giving Lily a little hope, but he merely laughed as he saw it flash across her eyes. Laughing he managed to say "do you really think your feeble attempts impress me? Now for the last time move aside or I will have to break my promise to dear old Severus."
"Please Lily ", intoned Peter Pettigrew "you don't have to die, he just wants Harry "and the man once considered her friend lift his own wand. Lily moved to place herself between her baby and the two wizards.
Voldemort took his chance and with a loud voice shouted "Avada Kedavra "at Harry. Lily jumped to get in front of the spell, to take the spell for her son, an act of pure love that these monsters would never know or understand.
She was too late; the blast hit Harry full on. Lily turned in horror at her son, no longer the crying baby, but a lifeless lump of a thing. All fight, all emotion, all everything drained out of her, she slumped to the floor, her insides as dead as Harry.
Voldermort just laughed and yelled in glee as he looked down at her in pure disgust. Turning to Pettigrew, The Darkest of dark wizards said "Severus can have her, let go "and as quickly as they came, they were gone.
A/N well that's another one done , what do you think ? Review please , please review .
I am also interested in other people's ideas on this , where do you think the changes could come ? where do you think the nudge in just the wrong place should occur . will do my spin on them if you like .
New one soon , I promise