By reading the title and looking at where this story is posted, you guys already know that it's a Hetalia Fanfiction, with an oc character. I will make this story different and unique, because I know there are many stories with people getting units. Don't worry; it won't be where the oc is a Mary-Sue. Least I hope my character won't be a Mary-sue. Uh, anyways, time for my usual things!
Disclaimers: I do not own Hetalia, for it belongs to the awesomeness that is of Hidekazu Himaruya. The only things I own are my oc characters, and the story plot.
Summery: Luciana Montgomery is just an average fan of Hetalia. She enjoys the series, not to mention making references involving the characters. One day, while scrolling the internet, she noticed a strange e-mail saying about having Hetalia Units. Thinking that it was one her friends playing a joke on her, she accepted. Though, things are about to change for this girl when she will start to receive packages with certain people inside it. God help her.
Rated T for Teens: Reasons for this rating is due to: Some foul language, a little sexual content, awkward moment, yaoi hinted moments, and France being France, not to mention Prussia tries to make things awesome.
Chapter One: Always Check Who Sent The E-mail!
Luciana was rolling around her bed, as she was trying to not wake up for a fun-filled day of school. For one thing, she stayed up late playing Pokemon: Black Version. Not to mention she did not want to attend her math class, because her teacher tended to be quite boring. Still, Luciana knew that she needed to get up, or she would face the wrath of her mother, and even she knew that her mother was a force not to be reckoned with.
Hell, her mother was much scarier than Russia. Luciana giggled to herself at her little joke about that reference. She then managed to get out of bed and looked at the time.
"… It's six-fifteen in the morning… really? Ah well, might was well get up anyways." Luciana muttered to herself, as she headed to the bathroom across the hall from her room. Once there, she began to brush her teeth, as she was trying to get the sleep out of her blue eyes. Her black hair was a mess, as all hair would be when one was sleeping. She then combed it to where it would be more tamed.
It would show that her hair was medium length, though it seemed the bangs would cover her eyes, as Luciana proceeded to place two butterfly hair-clips to hold her bangs up. Grinning to herself at a job-well done, she proceeded to her room.
Once there, the fourteen year old had changed into her school uniform. Her public school has seemed to adopt the whole school uniform thing, due to various complaints last year about everyone dressing inappropriately. Then again, being in one of the hottest states in America, Florida does tend to make everyone dress strangely.
Still, Luciana was against it, as she actually called the principle a "Commie" which made her history teacher at the time laugh. Still, Luciana had gotten used to the long sleeved white button shirt, and the pleaded blue skirt. She placed on the blue blazer jacket, and grabbed her school bag and headed downstairs.
As she was heading down, she froze as she smelled the aroma of pancakes. Quickly, she rushed to the kitchen, and squealed in delight.
"Holy snapples, pancakes!" She shouted with glee, while rushing over to the plate, as her mother was there, laughing the whole time at this.
Her mother was a lovely lady. Luciana looked just like her, only younger. Her mother though, had her hair shorter, which reached to her upper-neck, as there was a beauty mark on the right side of her lower cheek. Her mother wore a business suit, as she wanted to look her best when working in her flowershop. The older woman looked at Luciana with a bright smile on her face. "I'm not sure where you get your love of pancakes from, your father or your aunt." Her mother joked, as Luciana had grabbed some pancakes and went over to the table and placed the plate down, as she reached out for the maple syrup.
"Meh, I don't know, but its holy pancakes!" Luciana proclaimed, grinning at her mother the whole time, as the older woman returned the grin. Then after finishing the pancake goodness, Luciana quickly waved good-bye to her mother, as she rushed passed her older brother Eric, who was four years older than her, and her father. Both her father and older brother had blonde hair, but Eric had green eyes, like their mother, while their father had brown. Luciana inherited her eyes from her grandmother from her mother's side.
Anyways, Luciana had grabbed her bookbag from the couch, as she checked to make sure she had everything for school. "Bye guys. I'm going to get my edumication!" Luciana shouted, as she was heading to the door, while putting on her tennis shoes
It was then she heard a familiar groan of annoyance from Eric. Once again, she has annoyed him, which was her job. "It's Education!" Eric shouted back, correcting her, but then Luciana had poked her head in the doorway of the kitchen, as she pulled her eyelid down with her finger and spat her tongue out at him.
"Nya~ not the boss of me!" Luciana said, giggling like a madwoman, as she went back into the hall way
Eric let out a growl of anger and annoyance, as Luciana did her best to hold it her laughter. "Damn it, Luciana! I'm going to kick you're a-"
"That better be a positive word, young man." their mother said, as Luciana snickered to herself, as she could imagine the look on her mother and Eric's faces.
Luciana could hear her father chuckle, before he shouted, "Have a nice day, Luci. Don't talk to any boys you here!" though, it was obvious he was joking about that… maybe.
Luciana tied her shoe laces hearing this, as she rolled her eyes a bit, while smiling. "Okay dad, I will only talk to gay guys, my guy friends, and guys who have girlfriends. Is that acceptable?" Luciana asked. There was a pause in the air, until she heard her father clear his throat.
"That will be fine." Her father agreed in his reasonable tone. Luciana could not help but be reminded of Germany whenever her father acted like that. Her dad was funny.
"Okay! Thanks dad. Alright, I'm heading out now. Bye!" Luciana shouted, as she then left the house. She looked up at the old house that her parents had. It was an old Breakfast and Bed inn, which made Luciana remember a few things when she was just a little kid. Most of her memories were of her looking for ghosts that were hiding in the old place, as she believed that it might have been haunted, while Eric would have told the back then seven-year-old Luciana that she was crazy. Then again, she felt herself that way.
Luciana snapped out of her thoughts, as she remembered about school. She let out a small whine of protest about school, while gripping her shoulder book-bag, and was soon heading off to said place, while she was humming to herself. Her school was of walking distance, so of course she did not mind it. She liked walking.
The girl was in her own little world, just watching the cherry blossoms trees that were lined up on the grass, letting their petals fall to the ground. She twirled around, giggling the whole time, while attempting to catch the falling petals. Luciana was like a little child at times, but that was the greatest thing about her. She still held this innocence that most people do not have anymore.
Sure, she watched and played things that are quite violent, but she still had the air of innocence around her. Luciana still has the whole aspect of the world being beautiful in its own way, to where she would see the glass half-full which was something that anyone rarely does anymore in this world. When she arrived at school, she was immediately tackled by one her friends.
"Good morning, everyone! Hope you all had a nice sleep!" Luciana giggled, as she was being hugged by her best friend for close to nine years, Nora. A red-headed girl with freckles on her cheeks, and is the tallest of their group of friends, as Luciana is the shortest. Many people do confuse Luciana as an eleven to twelve year old at times.
Nora laughed, as she held Luciana tighter. "Hey, Luciana, I missed your craziness from yesterday!" Nora said, as she was hugging the girl, before releasing her. Luciana's other friends could only watch, with smiles and grins on their faces.
Besides Luciana and Nora, there was Alexander, a blonde haired boy that was the tallest of the three boys, who was of british decent. Maria, a Hispanic with short hair, and with three ear piercings, Kevin, a boy with black hair, with blue strands that he had dyed, and was sometimes speaking Russian, and Joey, who has brown hair, and reminds Luciana of Italy at times, then again, he was Italian.
Luciana smiled at her friends the whole time, as they entered the school building. It was about six months as a freshman. Luciana couldn't wait for spring break soon. Though, it was a bit sad for her at the same time, considering Eric would be going back to college, seeing as his spring break was this week. Luckily he just got home today, and it was today was a Friday, so she was excited because of that.
Time Skip…
School had ended for the day, and Luciana got out, as she was stretching her arms, giving out a small little yawn, as Nora and the others were following her out the whole time.
Alex snorted, as Luciana had told him something funny. "So, tell me again what you told your father?" Alex asked, as he looked at their resident legal midget, as he called her. Luciana looked over at the blonde haired boy and grinned.
"I told my dad that I would only talk to you, Kevin and Joey, Gay guys, and guys who already have girlfriends. Apparently, he's still a bit paranoid about boys trying to ask me to hang out or something. Atleast, that's what my mom told me." Luciana answered. The five of them stared at Luciana for a moment, before they started to laugh, with Luciana joining in.
"Hey, Luce" a voice called out. Luciana looked over, to see a boy with brown hair walking over to them, which made Kevin glare at him for a moment, as the others looked uneasy. Luciana on the other hand, smiled a bit.
"Oh, hey Trevor, how are ya?" She asked, as Trevor went over to her, and gave her a grin.
"Nothing much, say, I was wondering if you wanted to catch a movie with me. You know that movie that's going to come out in three weeks." Trevor explained. Luciana stared for a moment, and then nodded her head.
"Sure, that would be cool. Oh! Can my friends come too?" Luciana asked, oblivious to the fact that she was being asked out.
Trevor stared at her for a minute, but then shrugged. "Um… Alright then, I'll let you know when we can see it." He answered hesitantly, before leaving. Luciana looked over to her five friends, smiling the whole time.
"Cool, we might have someone join our little group!" Luciana chirped, smiling the whole time.
Maria frowned at this. "Luce. I don't trust him. He's a snake!" Maria exclaimed, expressing her opinion, while Luciana looked at her friend with confusion.
"Huh, why do you say that, Maria?"
"Maria just doesn't trust boys being around you, that's all" Joey said, trying to keep the peace. He watched Luciana stare for a moment, she then smiled brightly.
"Oh, okay," she answered, smiling happily, as her friends could only stare at her. Already, each of them was thinking of a way to protect and preserve Luciana's cuteness and innocence. As they were walking Luciana home, Nora seemed to remember something.
"Oh. Luci, when you get home, check your e-mail. I sent you something funny" Nora said, grinning the whole time. Lucinana looked up and smiled happily
"Oooh, really? What is it?" Luciana asked, as she was jumping up and down with excitment.
Nora laughed at this. "You'll see" Nora said, grinning the whole time. Already, Luciana could not wait to get home and see the e-mail that Nora was talking about. Everyone knew Nora was notorious for her e-mail jokes and pranks. That was always something to look forward to.
Soon, Luciana had gotten home in one piece, as she waved good-bye to her friends, who continued on walking. Luciana soon got into her home, and began to look around. She noticed that it was a bit quiet than usual.
Luciana looked around, expecting someone to walk by. "Mom, Dad, Eric? Where are you guys?" Luciana called out, while trying to find them, as she held her shoulder bag close to her.
"Dad's at work and Mom's at her flower shop" Eric called out from the kitchen, as the black haired girl went over, seeing her brother was busy writing something on his laptop. She went over and sat next to him, as she was pulling out her binder and agenda to do her homework. It felt like old times to her, doing homework with her brother, when they were kids.
As she pulled out her math book, she glanced over at Eric for a moment. "So, what are you working on?" Luciana asked, as she opened the page that was required to do the math problems.
"Countries relationships before, during, and after WWII" Eric said, while he was typing on his laptop the whole time. Luciana was starting her first math problem, as she thought of a few things.
"Austria and Hungary were married, but after WWI, they were forced to divorce and Hungary was stuck with Russia the whole time." Luciana said, as she was working on her math problems, as she could feel Eric looking at her for a moment.
"You got that idea from Hetalia, didn't you?"
"… Maaaybe"
"You're so weird" Eric said with an annoyed tone, as Luciana just gave her older brother a grin. Soon, the girl had finished up her homework, as her brother had finished his paper. At that time, her parents came home, and her mother went to cook some Mexican, as Luciana excused herself and went to her room.
Her room wasn't as girly like most rooms. Her walls were painted in soft blue, as her full-sized bed was close to the window. She went over to her small desk, where her computer was, along with a few books and music cases lying around. Once she logged on her computer, she quickly went on her e-mail account, and noticed the new message immediately. The girl then clicked on it, and began to giggle seeing what it was.
Dear, Luciana Montgomery
You have been chosen to try out our Hetalia Units where you will have your own character from Hetalia. This is not a joke. All you need to do is click yes. When you do, your first unit will be delivered tomorrow. Don't worry about your family being shipped off somewhere. So, please click yes for this is an experience of a life-time.
Hetalia Unit Co.
Luciana could not help but begin to laugh until the end. It seemed so real and legit, but Nora was always striving to make anything look real. Wanting to make Nora happy, Luciana clicked 'yes' and watched as a pop-up came up on the screen.
Thank you for clicking yes. Your unti will be delivered tomorrow.
"Luciana! Dinner is ready!" Her mother shouted from downstairs
"I'm Coming Mom!" Luciana shouted, as she logged off her e-mail and headed downstairs to eat dinner with her family.
The Next Day...
Luciana woke up, yawning the whole time, as she sat up and rubbed her eyes tiredly. She then got out of bed, while tugging on the sleeve of her penguin printed pajamas. The small girl then headed downstairs, and noticed her mother was rushing around.
"Morning, mom" Luciana said. She watched her mother stop for a moment, and looked over and smiled, as her black hair was in a messy bun, and her brown eyes seemed to be in a panic
"Hi, Sweetie. Um, Luci, there will be a package for me today, so please try to get it inside. Your brother and father are out, and I have to get to the flower shop!" Her mother said, in a panic, as she grabbed her car keys.
Luciana smiled and nodded her head. "Okay, Mom. I'll keep an eye out for the package, I'll see you later, mom, and have a good day at work!" Luciana chirped.
"You are such a good girl. Mommy loves you!" and with that, her mother left the house. Luciana could only giggle a bit, as she went to get some breakfast, which consisted of scrambled eggs and toast. Once she finished eating, and washed the plate, Luciana went to take a shower. After that, she changed into a blue pleaded skirt, with bike shorts underneath. Strange habit, but Luciana felt comfortable to have some shorts under her skirts. She then placed her black long sleeved shirts, and them her socks and black boots that reached to her lower knees.
The girl then went downstairs to the living room, and watched some television, mostly the funimation channel. As Luciana was watching Black Butler, she heard the door bell. She got up and walked over to the door way and opened the door. To her shock, there was a man standing there. He was wearing a blue shirt… with Mint Bunny on it.
"Uh… hi?" Luciana said, unsure of what to make out on this.
The man smiled at her. "Hi, are you Luciana Montgomery?" the man asked.
"Yes, this is her,"
"Ah, good. You package is here, and just sign on this tablet." with that, Luciana took the pen that was on the tablet and she signed her name, and she noticed the package. It was huge.
"Urm, thank you." Luciana said, looking slightly confused.
"No problem. Oh, your next package will be in the next three business days" and with that, the man left, as he went into a truck, which was green and said 'Mint Bunny Shipping.' Luciana only stared, as she managed to get the package in.
"Wow, mom really out did herself." Luciana muttered to herself. She then noticed a manual, and she opened it up and began to read it. Then there was an awkward silence in the house, as Luciana continued to read the book for a moment.
….
…..
…..eh?
"WHA!" Luciana screamed in pure shock, as she was reading the fine print on the paper
Congradulations, you have an America Unit.
All Luciana could do at this point was to stare and stare the whole time, as she was having a 'what the hell' moment right about now.
OMG! First chapter, and it's the longest that I have ever typed. Sorry about this chapter being more focused on Luciana, but I wanted to show the depth and child-like personality she has. I know not many people like multiple ocs, but Luciana's parents and brother would appear mostly. Well, America will be in the next chapter, and we can only wonder how things will be when America is activated. Not to mention Luciana's parents and older brother finding out about this.
Anyway, please Read and Review!
Edit: Yeah, I wanted to re-do some of my early chapters, and try to make it more like the newer ones. Just minor changes, so enjoy!
