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My eyes burst open. What's going on? Were am I? I can't feel my body and I start to panic. I do the only thing I could do in this kind of situation. I close my eyes and imagine a field. a big field. with flowers. The suns rays beat down on my arm. The grass is so tall that they go up to my thighs. I brush my hands through the grass. It feels real. But then everything, Every memory, every feeling, hit me and everything turns black. pitch black.
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I am in the field again. This time there are flowers everywhere. I bend down and pick one up. And considering that I got shot three times in the stomach, I don't feel anything. At all. I hear my name being called. I turn around, but there's no one there. I keep hearing my name. Suddenly, the sky turns grey, full of clouds. The setting changes and I am in... in... no where. It's pitch black and my name is chanting everywhere. It starts to yell. I sink down to my knees and cover my ears with my hands. I yell.
"Tris!" My eyes burst open, once again. I see my mom shaking me awake. My mom. My mom. I jolt up and hug her in a tight hug.
" I thought you were dead mom!" I sob into her Abnegation robe. Abnegation. Abnegation. What am I going here?
" It's just a nightmare sweetie" her voice is soft and gentle like a cloud. I suddenly feel a stab of pain in my stomach. I groan.
" It's time for breakfast, Beatrice." breakfast? Where am I? I look around and see gray walls. A cupboard with gray clothes hanging in it. Abnegation. I'm in Abnegation. What am I doing here? What is mom doing here? The stab of pain returns to my stomach and I quickly get out of bed, big mistake. It just got worst. I run to the bathroom and lift my shirt. I gasp.
There are 3 bullet holes in my stomach. I should be bleeding. I should be dead. I realize that after a second, I don't feel the pain. It's like there's nothing there. I also notice that my hair has been recently cut. I try to remember the last time I cut my hair in Abnegation. Aptitude test. oh no.
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I walk into the Hub. Just like last time.
I take a seat. Just like last time.
I say goodbye to my parents. Just like last time.
I turn to Caleb and look at him in disgust. Not like last time.
"Caleb Prior" Before Caleb leaves I grab his collar and bring his face close to mine. I look him straight in the eyes.
"I know you will choose Erudite." He looks at me shocked.
"How would y-you know?" He's shaking. I grin.
" If you try to hurt mom and dad. I. will. kill. you." I lean closer to him.
" And this time I won't hesitate." I let him go. He stumbles on his way to the bowls. He looks up at me. I mouth a single word. A word I should have said last time
'bye'
His blood goes into the bowl. The water turns a light shade of pink.
"Erudite" I ignore the gasps and cries. And wait impatiently.
"Beatrice Prior" I lean close to mom
"Take care of dad. I know he will not forgive me, But tell him that even if he does or not, I will always love him." She smiles.
I walk up to the bowls and grab the knife from Marcas. I glare at him. This 'man' is a monster. I grab the knife and a drop of blood goes into the bowl.
"dauntless" just. like. last .time.
I know this is very short but the next chapter will be longer. I promise. Do you guys have any suggestions?
Bye Pansycakes!
~FourTris4life2005