Hello,
I am new here I love reading cid ff stories and I just felt like writing something I just started this story and I don't know really how it is. It would be really encouraging if one reads this and tell me how I am this is the first time I have written something
He was just eight years old, He was running far from there he ran till where he could ,at one point he stopped ,but then the words of his brother started ringing in his ears "go run don't stop just go, please just go" and he started running again. He dint know where he was or where he was going he just knew he had to run ,he had just closed his eyes for a moment but due to that he dint notice the stone and he fell.
There was a blackout now, his eyes were shut ,he was hurt ,badly hurt ,he could feel the blood oozing from his leg, but there was no one there now ,no one. He just wanted his brother badly ,just hoping he would come ,just like he comes when he is hurt ,but somewhere inside him something told him he would never come.
These are just the starting sentences of the story if it is good enough to continue please tell me.
thank you