Disclaimer: I don't own Bartimaeus.
Kitty stood at the center of the remains of the Glass Palace. She stared down at the twisted forests of iron. She hadn't believed that Nathaniel was dead, that he was gone and never coming back. But now, staring at the convoluted clumps of metal, still smoking slightly from the residual magic, she truly believed that he was gone. Inside, she felt hollow, empty, like nothing else mattered. His last words came to her, all his promises. Tears leaked from her eyes and dropped like rain on the iron. All her hopes and dreams that maybe, they would be together, gone.
"So much for your promises," she said at last.
This is my first fanfiction, so please use constructive criticism. Telling me that my writing sucks is not going to make it better.