Soooo~ I've been reading a lot of Chronicles of Narnia fanfics. I've been obsessed with Caspian/OC. And to me there needs to be more cause not everyone likes Caspian/Susan. I love Caspian/ Lucy[a lot]. Im going to try out this prologue. (oh and I have recently changed my pen-name)
Breathe
Run
Breathe
Run
Breathe
Look behind
Breathe
"NOOO!" someone snarled/screamed behind me. I panicked tripping a little. 'please if there is any god out there please let me get away from here!', I prayed to anyone…anything that could hear me. "You know you cant escape that easily you little whore!" it screamed behind me. But I had luck on my side for my dad insisting I do track. 'thank you papa!' I smiled a little but then shook my head. No time for smiling. Just run, just run just run just run just run. I gasped as I tripped sending my body onto hard cement. I found I a road! I sighed in relief. I got up and started to run across the road. I stopped in the middle.
'what are you doing?' my mind screamed but my body just wouldn't move. "Oh god…" I gasped as a semi-truck was coming down the small road. 'no no NO NONO!' my mind screamed at me but I stood in wonder as the headlights slowing came at me. I sighed with happiness before I looked up to see the chaser staring at me in horror. I smiled at him. "YOU CANT HAVE ME!" I screamed before the world turned dark and my body went within the cement.
(meanwhile…)
"Trufflehunter…what is that?" a short man asked stretching his arms before rubbing his belly. "What is what, me dear friend?" a badger said looking at him. "That in the sky…almost looks as if its falling…" his voice trailed off because a piercing female scream erupted in the air. "Get the prince! And get the medical tent ready!" the short man order the surrounding goat-men. "DON'T JUST STAND THERE! GO!" his screamed.
"Your Highness! Hurry! There's an emergency!" a goat-man said running into a room with four people in it.
"Alright lets go." A musical voice said. He didn't even give the faun[the goat-man] time to explain before he was running out of the chambers.
"lead the way, faun." He said kindly before he was running again. "why is there a medical tent being setup? Is someone hurt?" he question running past the bustling animals and dwarfs. "no but someone, a daughter of Eve, fell out of the sky. Trufflehunter and Nikabrik saw her first so they went ahead to find her. There!" the faun explained before dashing away with the prince following him.
"Trufflehunter! Is she badly injured?" The prince asked, kneeling beside the girl. She was cover in blood from her cheek to her thigh. "No other than the long cut for her chest to her thigh. The blood on her cheek was from a cut. Other than that it seems that she had a comfortable landing…don't see how she just fell out of the sky! Poor dear." The badger explained looking at her before gestering that the prince pick her up. "is she one of the Queens of old?" Nikabrik asked looking at her. "no the siblings would have come together. Also I've seen the kings and queens portraits. She looks nothing like them." He answered. "we better hurry, Prince Caspian. We may not have much time. If only we had Queen Lucy's healing vial…" the badger said trialing off before shaking his head. "come along."
Caspian picked the girl up as if she were a treasure that would break. He placed her head on his shoulder before walking away. He looked down at her face.
'she's so pale…
Who are you are, Mysterious Angel?'
Ok so the girl is obviously my own creation~:D
I don't own chronicles of Narnia and im not getting any mail saying I do….im still waiting for the papers :P lol
OC description:
Age: 16
Hair: black
Eyes: deep green
Height: 5"4'
Ok that's all I really have so far so if you want to put input or give some ideas that would be HIGHLY appreciated
Imagination-Unleashed