Death Cave (Chapter 1)

by FireWolf333

One day in Ooo Finn and Jake decide to fallow a misterious cow to two caves. While looking at one of the caves Jake is traped inside a dungon and can't escape alone. Only Finn and Billy can save Jake now from the keeper of the dungon. Is Finn willing to make the ultimit sacrifice to save his brother?

In the land of Ooo, Finn the human and his brother Jake (a magical dog) were sitting in the Tree Fort when they heard a strange knock at their door. "Jake, are you expecting someone?" Finn asked in a puzzled tone. "No man, you know when I invite someone I tell you!" Jake replied. surreptitiously Finn and Jake snuck to the window to see who or what was at the door. "WHAT THE GLOB!?" Finn exclaimed as he saw who was at the door. "Finn, it's just a cow. Why are you acting so surprised?" Jake assured. "Jake, don't think that I am crazy but havent we seen that cow before?" "Oh yea, that is the cow from when we went walking through the woods and I lost my viola." Jake pointed out as Finn went to open the door.

When Finn opened the door written in sticks on the ground was the words 'GET ON'. "Finn, I i'm not so sure that we should get on this cow." "Jake, you don't have to get on the cow, you just have to follow the cow." Finn notified. The cow led them down a dark path covered with thorn bushes. As they moved along Jake kept getting scratched by the thorn bushes. "You know that if you get on this cow that you won't be all jacked up when we reach our destination." "I don't care! I'm not getting on that cow, it creeps me out." Jake retaliated. A few minutes later two caves appeared ahead. "I will check out the one on the left if you do the same on the right Jake." "Ok Finn." Just as jake went up to the right cave it closed in around him. "JAKE!" Finn yelled while he watched his brother be swallowed by the huge cave.

Finn tried pounding on the wall, kicking the wall, and surprisingly crying on the wall. He realized that he could not get his friend back by doing any of that. Finn leaned against the wall and tried to think of how he could get Jake back. Then it dawned on him that Billy's crack was not that far from where he was. Finn sprinted as fast as he could to Billy and Yelled "Billy, Jake has been trapped…" "in the right cave, yes I know" Billy finished as Finn caught his breath. "You came to me to ask if I would help you to save your dog. Yes I will, I know those caves because they are the same place that I lost my dog, but Finn are you willing to take the ultimate sacrifice to save your dog?" Finn hesitated over this but finally replied "yes I am."

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