This is a redo of my first take on this story. I hated how it turned out, and am trying again on it.

Kim, Rudy, Jerry, Eddie, and Milton were all at the dojo. Jack was late, again. Not a surprise.

"Hey guys, sorry I'm late." Jack said running in.

"Well it's about time you showed up." Kim said, obviously agitated. Rudy came in from his office.

"Ahh, good you're here Jack. I have an announcement to make." Rudy walked in front of the kids.

"Sit." Rudy said, as if talking to a kindergarten class. All of them sat abruptly.

"I'm not going to be here today for practice. So you guys can either teach yourselves or you can just go home. I don't really care. I will be back tomorrow, so show up prepared. Good bye." Rudy picked up his stuff and walked out the door. As soon as he left, Eddie shouted,

"Looks like we can have our paintball war after all."

"YEAH!" Said him, Jerry and Milton.

"You guys coming?" Jerry asked Kim and Jack. Jack and Kim looked at each other.

"Nah, I think we'll practice. You guys have fun." Eddie, Jerry, and Milton walked out saying,

"Yeah, yeah, yeah." Jack and Kim changed and got on the mat.

"So, what do you want to practice?" Kim asked, as she circled around Jack.

"I don't know. What do you want to practice?" Jack asked her, as he circled also.

"Well…" Kim was cut off by screaming from the outside. Two bullies from school were messing with Milton, Eddie and Jerry. And they had guns.

"Should we…ahh!" Jack screamed, he grabbed his neck and fell to the mat.

"Jack, what happened?" Kim said, kneeling down next to him. She looked at his neck and saw his hand covering something. She couldn't see what. She started to pull away Jack's hand when it fell limp. She pulled his hand away and saw a hole. A bullet sized hole.

"Jack!" She screamed.

"Guys!" She called to her friends. Eddie, Jerry, and Milton came running in, saying mutters, of "What?", and "What's wrong?". They kneeled beside Jack along with Kim. She was holding his hand to his neck. She slowly pried it away. Jerry, Eddie and Milton screamed,

"Jack! Oh my god he got shot!"

This chapter is the same, I guess.