okay im new around here, so im not completely sure of what to do. anyway heres my first shot at story writing hope you like it.

Ninja-Naped

Ch.1 The beginning

So Deidara sempai, what exactlly are we gonna do with this one? I don't know yet Tobi un, I heard them say as I lay there waiting to make my move. Those Idiots! They don't even know Im not really knocked out! I KNOW SEMPAI! WE SHOU….. will you shut your mouth Tobi un! Deidara said shushing Tobi, do you want her to wake up? Oh, sorry sempai I was just about to say maybe we should tie her up and hide her in a hole so she cant escape or be found. Tobi you idiot! That would be great If we werent going to take her with us! whispered a agravated Deidara. S-sorry sempai. I-I was j-just s-saying. Well It seems to me that I am going to have to deal with an idiot in a mask and a short tempered b… wait that is a boy right, guren thought to her self while opening her eye just enough so she could see what they looked like. She quikly shut her eye when deidara bent over her to conferm she was knobked out. Hmmm, he said as he was examining her, well shes got a cute face, He started to feel her up to see if she had any weapons hiding in her dress, when he came up to her chest he stopped, and a great body shape too un. That's when she kicked her knee into his groin area and shot her eyes open. What the hell! He squeked out while cluthing the area Guren had kicked. That's for staring, and feeling my body! Well you should have taken it as a compliment! He said this starting to let go off his sore area with his voice becoming normal again. At this remark she could feel her face turning red. HEY! KEEP YOUR REMARKS TO YOUR SELF OR ELSE ILL DO WORSE! Sempai, maybe you should listen to her. SHUT IT TOBI! WHOSE SIDE ARE YOU ON ANY WAY! Sorry sempai but Im just trying to be resonable. Deidara had ignored this for he was having a stare down with the red headed girl that had kicked him. For a while there was a silence. Hmph, guren scohped turning around, well maybe I don't like rude remarks like that! Expecally from blond girly boys. The stunned Deidara just stood there not knowing what to say after what she had said to him. W-well, GAH! I AM NOT A GIRLY MAN! Says the girly man. HEY YOUR LUKY I HAVE TO TKE YOU WITH OR I WOULD HAVE JUST KILLED YOU THEN AND THERE! This made her back off with her smart remarks, that's right he would've killed me, but why didn't he, why does he have to take me with him in the first place, she thought to her self. Hello?! Arnt you gonna make another smart remark or are you finnaly gonna be quiet like good little girls are supposed to be un?

HAH! CLIFF HANGER! Well now I know there will be questions on to who this Guren person is. Well she is my oc. She , of course like I said many times in the story, is a red head. She is a verry, and I mean VERRY short tempered girl. She also can be a cry baby. Just visualize this, a girl who is just about a head shorter than Deidara with short glossy red hair dark brown eyes wearing a poofy just above the knee dress with no arms that has flowers on it. She also wears black knee high boots and black elbow lenghth gloves . Now I defenintly know you people will be wondering why I call it a DeiSaku story, well you find out latter in this fan fiction. Anyways bye peoples! Until next time!*blows kisses*