this picks up from Freak nation, please give it a go, i have only just started watching Dark Angel, from borrowed dvds. Flames are welome as long as you can tip me on how i can improve the story, hope you enjoy

DISCLAIMER- i do not own Dark Angel (only the characters i have made up for this story)


"As dawn breaks on this, the third day of the siege at Terminal City the situation is tense but unchanged, while several hundred of transgenics remain barricaded inside the restricted area, police and National guards stand an uneasy watch on the perimeter, each side seemingly waiting to see what the other will do next" A news reporter announced Police cars and trucks could be seen behind her watching the city,

As the sun was beginning to rise over the broken city, a flag of black red and white with a large bird in the middle was raised on a high pole to tower over the group of transgenics and there human friends that stood watching proudly, as the flag waved in the wind,

"Now look what you have done," a man wearing a white glove, tightened his grip on the hand of the woman standing next to him, she stared at the flag thinking about the events that had brought her and the people that stood by her here, bar three of the people there, just like her they came from a lab, genetically made to be the perfect soldier, traces of different animals could be found in there DNA depending on what they where created for.

The sun was high in the sky now as people gathered around behind the police cars, waiting, yelling and holding anti-transgenic signs, police battled to keep the people back, Max stood atop of a building looking down on the crowd

"And they say where monsters," She spoke to Alec, another transgenic, an X5 like her, they walked back in to the building together, a group sat around the TV, another lot where training, and others where seen just laying back, "where going to need to place more people on watch," Max spoke loud enough for everyone to hear, they all saw her as there leader, she was the one that freed them from Manticore, and she was the one that took all of them under her wing, protecting them, "you, you, you, and you," she pointed at random transgenics, "grab a weapon, follow mole he'll show you where to stand post,"

"you know Max, you starting to sound more and more like a manticore leader," Alec laughed, Max spun round bringing her leg out, she swiped it under Alec and he fell to the floor with a crash, Max leaned over him, one hand grabbed a heap of his shirt

"Don't even joke about it," she growled

"Ok sorry," he held his hands up in defense, Alec got to his feet brushing down his shirt

"O.C," Max called out

"Yeah, what up boo," came the reply,

"We need more gas for the generator, can you and sketchy handle that,"

"Yeah no problem, don't worry sketchy and Original Cindy got your back" she called out to a tall lanky guy standing in the corner talking to a X5 holding a 3 day old baby in her arms, he immediately followed her over to a van getting behind the wheel

"Logan," Max called out again, There was some much that had to be done, and now because of the proceedings happening out side the fence it was going to be even harder to gather everything that they needed, and with more and more transgenic arriving by the hour, what they had wasn't going to last to long, "where's Logan," She called out again,

"He said he was going to pick up his computer stuff," a white skinned transgenic answered,

"Hey Max check this out," Max followed the voice towards the TV

"…remember these transgenics are extremely dangerous, if you see one do not attempt to approach it, do not attempt to enter Terminal City…" Ames white's face filled the TV

"I should have finished him," Joshua growled, his dog face scowling

"No, we need to show these people that we are not the enemy," Max replied glaring at every transgenic around her

"It's been playing over and over for the last half hour," Luke informed her, static came across the TV then two eyes filled the screen,

"Do not attempt to adjust your set, this a streaming freedom bulletin, it can not be stopped and it is the only free voice left in this country, Dangerous you say Mr. White, how dangerous can they be when you yourself has fought these people and lived to tell about it," the screen changed again to a man being interviewed, "monsters, no not anymore that you or I" the screen showed the eyes again "Before the pulse hit an increasing amount of people where turning to IVF, in the hope of having children these Transgenics are no different than those children except that they where designed to be faster, stronger, to fight for this country to protect you, and you call them dangerous. This has been a streaming freedom bulletin peace out" the screen changed back to the looped video of Ames White

"He's wasting his breath," Mole said from behind Max, she turned to face him, he resembled a lizard, a cigar hang from his mouth, a shotgun sat comfortably on his shoulder, even though Max knew that it was empty, "the ordinaries are never going to warm up to us"

"He doesn't care" Max said as she walked across the room, to Gem the transgenic holding the baby, as she spoke too other heavily pregnant girls. Which was what they are, Max thought some of them only being about 16 years old, On the mission that had caused her recapture she had blown up the embryo lab, which meant in order to create more soldiers Manticore set a breeding system, where Trangenitics where paired up, Alec had been hers, she remembered there first encounter, Alec had come into her cell to complete his Assignment, only to have Max Kick him into the door. When she reached her destination the girls where all cooing over the baby, it seemed strange for these genetically empowered solders to do, but max smiled she was glad that they where living as normal lives as where possible given the circumstances,

"Have you named her yet," one off them asked

"Jewel," Gem replied as the baby was passed onto the next girl,

"I'm going to set up a team to start clearing out the apartments, we should have proper homes for you all soon," they could all stay in the abandoned car park, if the people out side these gates where going to push them in here then they where going to live here as seemingly comfortable as possible, the baby was then passed to her, she held it her arms, and felt a strange longing to hold her own baby in her arms, uncomfortable with the feeling she quickly handed it to the next girl waiting.

"Sir, what action do we take," a man dressed in a black suit addressed Ames White, he had just finished watching Eyes Only's announcement, he wanted to hunt down the man and kill him, they had come close finally tracing the hack but when they had arrived at the address the apartment was empty, they had destroyed everything they could find. But now he was back on line,

"I want another team put on tracing this Eye's only, I want to get rid of him, he's not helping with his transgenics are friendly campaign,"

"Yes, sir," he waved two fingers at one of the other suited men, dismissing him, "and what about the Transgenics sir,"

"The police are helping there, we just have to keep fueling them to go in and destroy them," he shuffled though some papers, "do we still have that mutant we captured the other day,"

"Yes, Sir, we had to tranquilize it, she broke out of her holding cell and killed three more officers yesterday,"

"Good, I want you to release her, and send a team to follow her, tape what she does; we'll show these people how dangerous they can be,"

"Yes, Sir," the man left the room, Ames picked up a photo of Max, She was the only one he was really after, he wanted her dead more than anything else, she could really spoil his plans

It only took three hours for the TV to fill with images of the released transgenic killing people,

"Hey caught your hack," Max smiled at Logan

"Just trying to help,"

"Max, you gotta come see this," Alex ran up to Max, slightly out of breath, She followed him back to the TV, replays of the killings where playing in slow motion,

"It's White, he's trying to scare people even more, come on we gotta go get her,"

"Wait a minute," Lagans gloved hand grabbed Max's arm, she pushed him away forgetting that it couldn't harm him "it could be a trap"

"Everything white does is a trap, we have to stop her, it's only doing us damage," Max gave a nod of her head, an Alec, Mole, and Joshua followed her to the two motorbikes that sat in the far end of the car park,

"Can you track her somehow," Max asked Logan who walked beside her, struggling to keep up

"I'm not set up yet, but the footage looked like sector 3,"

"Well that's where were heading then," She got on one of the bikes Joshua behind her, Alec got on the second one as Mole pulled up beside them in a van, "move out," she ordered and they all took off, in the first week that hey had lived in the isolated City they had managed to find a back entrance, the headed towards it then doubled back coming out on to the street behind the cop cars and protesters, the stopped briefly to scoff at the scene then continued towards sector 3 unnoticed.

The transgenic was an example of to much Dog DNA, she was looked like Joshua, except her long hair was blonde, and more feminine looking, she ran fast, the men with the video cameras had trouble keeping up with her in the car, the transgenic spotted a homeless person sleeping off a hangover and ran towards him, just as she was about to attack, a motorbike sped up the girl driving stuck her leg out as drove by knocking her back, the transgenic stood up and growled, Max stopped the bike and got off, she faced the dog-girl, fist held up ready to fight

"Let me little fella," Joshua walked in front of her, Max lowered her fist, but her stance told you she was still ready if it attacked, the transgenic was still growling as Joshua walked slowly towards her "it's ok, we help." Joshua flinched back as she swung at him

"White must hurt her bad," he continued to slowly inch towards her, making small noises, the female version of the two looked to relax as she started to whimper, Joshua placed a hand on her shoulder, and led her towards the van, Sirens could be herd in the distance getting louder,

"We better jet," Max got back on her bike, "Mole you take em back, me and Alec will distract the cops," the van was gone before the police cars showed up, they stopped in front of the bikes a couple of officers got out and drew there guns pointing them at Max and Alec, from behind the safety of there doors,

"Ready," Max said

"I'm always ready" Alec replied, and they took off in the opposite direction the van did

"FREEZE" the offices yelled out before getting back into there cars and chasing after them.

"Sir, X5-452 and other transgenics got the prisoner, sir" a nervous looking suit said

"Did you try to stop them," Ames asked

"No sir, that wasn't our orders sir,"

"That wasn't your orders," Arms repeated sardonically "get out," the man willingly obeyed, Ames picked up a chair and threw it at the wall, the chair bent on impact and pieces of the wall fell to the floor, a mobile phone rang, White put it to his ear

"…I understand, but I'm afraid that the people working for are not to bright… Fe'nos tol" He hung up the phone and placed back in his pocket, amazed at how the priestess of the conclave seemed to find out so much so quickly.

Max watched the people around her, the City was beginning to fill with Transgenics quickly, it would still be days maybe even weeks before everyone could be settled into apartments of there own, She smiled over at Joshua and the latest newcomer, it didn't take her long to settled down once they returned to Terminal city and she was surrounded by others like her, she was shorted than Joshua, but still managed to look down on most of those around her, they seemed to getting along rather well, Max was glad that Joshua now had someone after what he had to go though with Annie and Isaac,

"They make a cute couple" Alec said sitting down next to Max, Observing the same thing she did,

"It's nice that he's got someone he can be with," She said looking over at Logan who was setting up his computer things near the TV, Alec looked at her, he was starting to feel like an older brother to her,

"Everything will turn out, just wait and see," He said trying to comfort her

A man walked in both his arms held by to X6's "we found him out side, he's an ordinary" everyone that was in the area stooped what they where doing us Max, Alec and Logan walked over to the man

"Who are you and what do you want," Max said putting on her best Tough girl voice

"I've been watching the news I want to help," Joshua come up and stood behind Max

"Father?" he said


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