Ok so I've removed the story for editing purposes. I'm only going to edit the gammar and such. I won't change the actual story i had so far (chapter one) in any way other than basic editing (caps, punctuation, the like) It will be back up soon and hopefully i'll also have another up soon as well... and for those of you who've been waiting fo this and been disappointed i'm so so sorry. I've been horrible keeping up with this and i'll be back with it soon.

reguards,

Deanna