Okay, well this is my first fanfic, and I'm really don't know if my writing is good or not. I have a lot off serious doubts after what I've read off here, but my friends really think I should post it.
My Hidden Angel
Preface
I looked back into the red eyed demons before me, "I'll do it," I said confidently, wiping away tears from my eyes. "No!" my angel shouted, his voice filled with pain and frustration. "Bella please don't do this!" he shouted again. I looked back into his pain-filled eyes and saw his body shaking from tear-less sobs. I knew my decision would hurt him but if I chose the other option, it would not only kill him but it kill every other person I had come to know and love. "I'm s…so s…s…sorry, E…Edward," I stuttered, shaking from silent sobs as more tears fell from my eyes. "I have to do it. I'll a…always love you Eward. And I'll never," I paused and realized I was looking down. I looked back up at him, "never forget you. I'm sorry. Goodbye."
I finished and turned away from him. I walked, tears falling from my eyes, as I heard him thrashing against his binds and screaming my name out, begging me to come back. But I couldn't. So I let the demons lead me away from my angel, to which all I could suspect…was hell
So what do you think? Should I continue, and explain the history behind this tragedy? if you think so please R&R.
