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Summery:: Akihito's life was completely normal; school, friends, family, and even love life absolutely ordinary. That was until Haruhito, his brother, gets into trouble with the Japanese Yakuza, Asami. Akihito is bought down to the underworld where Asami resides and finds that his life is in the hands of someone very dangerous.
AKI'S POV
"Aki-chan, you forgot your lunch," yelled Haruhito.
"Oh thanks. I would've starved for the rest of the day," I exclaim taking the sack lunch from my older brother.
"You are so cute Aki-chan," Haruhito says as he ruffles my hair.
I smack his hand away. He seriously needs to see someone for his little brother complex.
"Don't call me that! I'm not a kid, I'm a senior now!"
"Okay okay," Haruhito says his hands in the air signaling defeat, "how about a goodbye kiss now Aki-chan?"
The door slams on Haruhito's face.
I love my older brother very much, honestly I do. Our life is the not best with both our parents gone but together we make it work. Aniki works in the supermarket and part time I work with the next door neighbor who does photography. I hope to pursue a career in it one day. Anyways, our jobs was enough to let us live comfortably in a two-bedroom apartment.
However, Aniki lately would come home from work a little too late the last few days. He always passes it off as "the manager asked me to help him with boxes in the back" or "just a little overtime work for some extra money." And I believed him. That was until he accidently took off his shirt when coming home, thinking that I wasn't home yet. Haruhito's entire chest was covered in bruises and a bullet wound. I tried asking aniki about it but as always there was an excuse.
RIIIINNNNGGGG!
The school bell goes off.
"Just great I'm going to be late again!"
I begin to run towards the school in hopes the first hour teacher doesn't notice.
ASAMI'S POV
BANG! BANG! BANG!
Three bullets was all it took to kill the rat.
"Asami-sama," Kirishima interrupts, "there is a meeting with Mr. Smith in thirty minutes."
Just great another person dying today.
"Take this rat's dead body and toss him somewhere, makes sure to there is no evidence of us about his killing," I order to the three other subordinates with me in the warehouse.
The three underlings quickly gets rid of the body in front of me, as they should. After all, I am Asami, a well-known yakuza boss and my word is absolute. There is nothing in this world I cannot have.
Handing the gun that I killed the rat with to Suoh I walk out of the crime scene. The sunlight fiercely shines unto my face. Only the sun defies me, no one else on this earth does. Honestly it does get boring without an animal to hunt down as an Underworld Lord.
My cellphone vibrates, one of my henchmen was to send me updates with a simple drug dealing in an ordinary supermarket. Apparently someone messed up.
Tokyo Supermarket
Some drugs were stolen
Manager is gone
Worker is captured
Should we kill him?
Looking at the text my blood boils, perhaps a little more blood today is okay. And someone has to pay for stealing what was mine. I reply with "No hold him hostage until the three of us get there."
Three deaths in one day, just what else can happen today?
