Rewind and Fast Forward
I recommend reading "The Top Ten Things I Like About You" before you read this (This is its sequel) and "School Papers" for a look at my OCs (Finn and Rachel's Kids)
Finn POV
I heaved yet another box out of the U-Haul that was parked outside our new house. "Our" being my wife, four kids and I. I wiped another bead of sweat off my forehead. Lifting heavy boxes and furniture in ninety-three degree weather is hard work. I sat down on the edge of the truck. I heard a soft noise as Rachel sat down beside me. "Almost done?" she asked. "Yeah just one more box" I went to the back of the truck and gestured to the last box. "What's in it?" she asked. I shrugged. She got up in one fluid movement and walked to the back of the truck with me, then knelt down and opened the box. There were two sheets of paper at the bottom of the box. I picked them up and she followed me out into the sunlight. I handed her one and read the other over quickly:
1. He ridiculously attractive half-smile/grin
2. His alluring cluelessness
3. The way his hair always looks messed up
4. How is hands are always in his pockets
5. His charismatic voice
6. How he's always so chivalrous
7. How he tries his hardest to be the "good guy"
8. His hilarious "word vomit"
9. How he almost whispers when he's nervous
10. How he kisses me
I burst out laughing at the list Rachel had written to me in high school right before we started dating. I looked up and smiled at Rachel and we switched lists. I laughed just as hard at my own list. "I forgot about these" she giggled. "I remembered" I smirked. She gave me the "your lying look". "Okay fine I didn't, but these are great" I kissed her softly we both dropped our lists. When we broke apart I noticed. My only daughter Caitlin looking up at us with two pieces of paper clutch tightly in her hands, reading intently. "Daddy you had a very bad vocabulary in high school" she commented, "oh and you both have the same number ten, and judging by the kiss I just caught you sharing you still feel the same way." My mouth dropped open. I was dumbfounded at how my seven-year-old daughter had just commented on our love letters, it was like she had just read another book. I heard giggling as my three sons peeked out from behind the big tree in the front yard. "Where did you learn that kissing technique?" My ten-year-old son asked. My turned and smiled at Rachel then we chased our kids around the yard. Laughing and running in the warm Ohio sun.
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