Hi guys this is my first 5-0 fanfiction so I hope it's all a little in character. Anyway, this isn't going to have more than 5 chapters or something, and it's mainly an excuse for my Danny Whumping problem. So, hope you like it.


It was supposed to be a fairly easy mission. Nothing special.

A lone drug dealer, who wasn't happy about something, and decided to go and shoot bullets in the air in a public shopping mall. It didn't look like he wanted to hurt somebody, because he let everybody escape, and when Steve saw the first glimpse of the man, he -quite relaxed for the dire situation- sat on one of the benches.

Outside the mall were regular cops, so they could finish the business when done.

Yes , Steve was feeling optimistic about this.

The whole 5-0 team stood in front of the guy. The man himself had stood up, grinning.

"Ah, look at this... The famous 5-0 team. They all came over here, for me?! I'm flattered." He spoke, bowing at the end of the sentence.

'what a psycho' Steve thought, and looking a Danny, he could see he thought the same thing.

Chin took a step forward. "Sir, we need you to drop your weapon. If not-" Chin was interrupted by the man, who held his hand up and spoke, "Yeah, yeah, I know the speech," He stopped talking a second. His eyes roaming over the four faces. When he looked at Kono he grinned.

"But you, beautiful girl... I wouldn't object if you would speak." Kono bared het teeth and shot two bullets right above his head.

Danny turned around. "You know, you can't just do that, that's kind of illegal." He looked at the man's face again. A face of surprise and shock.

He turned to Kono again. "whatever, screw that, his face was worth it."

Kono smiled.

But Steve had now this unsettling feeling in his stomach. The information they had found about this man, didn't match the guy they were standing before right now.

This should be a guy who was scared and confused, most likely on crack, emotional and a rookie of course.

But the man before them acted like he had done this a thousands of times, face almost blank, and looking like he knew exactly what he was doing.

"You're not alone, aren't you." Steve said, gripping his gun a little tighter, startling his friends.

The man grinned, gun now hanging limply by his side.

"No... No I am not."

Six man appeared behind him, armed to the teeth.

"Well shit." Danny muttered, earning a glare from Chin.

The first one to pull the trigger was Steve hitting one, who raised his gun at Chin, right in the head. Instantly followed by Danny who shot one guy in the chest.

One of the man ran forward towards Kono with a knife and Chin was just tackling someone when Steve saw it.

One of the bigger guys had come up to Danny, towering over him, animalistic grin on his face. When he was just about to plunge a knife in Danny's abandon, Danny swiftly took a step to the right, put a foot on the inside of the man's knee, making him lose his balance, and knocked him over with his elbow. The Detective kicked the knife out of the man his grasp, and kicked him against his side, so he rolled over on his stomach, and cuffed his hand behind his back.

Steve grinned. Never underestimate the short guy.

He didn't notice the man behind one of the small pillars until it was almost too late. He saw him pointing his gun at him, but it was like he was frozen and everything was in slow-motion.

Oh God, he thought. I'm going to get killed in such an easy mission, it's freaking embarrassing.

A loud bang echoed thru the halls, and he closed his eyes.

But he didn't feel anything. He didn't feel the dumbness or sharp pain he was expecting. He opened his eyes and saw the man was dead, laying in a pool of his own blood.

He turned around. Chin stood behind him with a smoking gun, probably still on the same place as when he fired the fatal shot.

As Chin slowly lowered the gun, still an expression of pure concentration on his face, Steve looked around.

Every man was down. He sighed and let himself fall on one of the benches. He looked at all the man on the ground, or being roughly pulled up by Chin, Kono or Danny. He wiped his face with his hand.

Three man where dead, one was being hauled up by Kono, one by Danny and one by Chin.

Wait. What?

Weren't there seven people?

He stood up as fast as he could, looking around with searching eyes.

Kono looked at Steve. "Is there something wrong?"

As on cue a loud rumbling penetrated thru the mall. The ground shook and for a moment all the members of the 5 -0 team stood still in shock.

Until all hell broke loose.

As debris fell down, Kono pushed and pulled al the (living) thugs toward the entrance of the shopping mall. Cops came running in trying to get all the people out.

Walls and pillars fell down and just when Steve was making his way to the exit he saw that Chin fell, and couldn't get up. Kono saw it too and they rushed over to his side, both taking one arm to help him walk.

But they were too late.

With a loud BANG, the whole ceiling before them collapsed, and blocked their way outside. Behind them wall were crumbling and debris kept falling.

Steve thought his ears might explode. Turning around, still supporting Chin, one last explosion erupted from the halls and then his vision went black.


Chapter one is done! Please be so kind and leave a review.

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