AUTHOR: WelshChicky
RATING: R
SUMMARY: i don't know how to writw a summary for this. So read to find out.
DISCLAIMER: i only the OFC and the dead person lol
FEEDBACK: lay it on me
ARCHIVE: if you want it, but tell me so I know where its going
NOTE: this is dark. If you don't like an evil riddick. then its best if you don't read
She rapped her jacket around her, just before she locked the back door to the restaurant. It was a cold night. And it looked like it was getting worse.
"God help. Someone help me. PLEASE!"
She looked around, trying to see where the screaming was coming from. But she couldn't see anything. She stood there for a while, trying to hear something else. But there was nothing. So she lifted the bag of rubbish off the ground, and walked to the dumpster. And thats when she saw it. There was a man ... she thought it was a man. He was huge ... and he was attacking someone.
She stumbled when she heard a sound of cracking. She pressed herself against the wall. Using it to help her walk. 'I have to phone the police ... get help. Just get help.' Her mind was going frantic. She could picture the beast in her mind. Covered in blood. "Shit!" She smacked into something. But that was the least of her worries, there was a feeling of metal pressing against her neck.
"ssshh." The man said, as he slide the metal across her neck. Barely touching her skin.
"This is going to be over so quickly."
"Please ... don't ... I'll do anything. Just don't hurt me ... please."
She whimpered. She could feel the fear run through her. Her whole body was shaking.
"Why not?" He whispered in her ear. She could hear the growl as he spoke. "If I let you go, you'll go to the mercs. And then they'll be after me. Can't have that now, can I?"
He sounded so calm and his voice so smooth. It made her fears even worse.
"I promise ... I won't tell. I promise. Just let me go ... I wanna go home to my family."
Her voice was shaking with every word. And he laughed. Removing the metal from her neck and replacing it with his other arm.
She could feel his hands slowly run down her shoulders. Before he spinned her around.
"You talk to much."
He said, pressing her against the wall. Gripping hold of her jaw.
"We gotta do something about that."
Then ever so gently, with his free hand he pulled out her tongue.
'No god ... NO ... please don't let these happen to me.' Her mind was screaming. The man let go of her jaw, and slide the metal into her mouth. She felt like she was going to gag. She was going to die and there was nothing she could do to stop it. And then she felt it.... the metal was slowly sliding across her tongue.
She could feel the blood pouring down her throat. As he pulled her tongue out of her mouth. Her whole mouth was full of blood. She sunk to her knees. The pain was unbearale.
"What goes well with tongue?"
That was the last thing she heard before everything went black.
He laughed, as he watched her slump to the ground. He bent down next to her, pulling her up by the hair. And as he looked at her face, he pulled his goggles off. Grinning. This was too easy. But the feel .... He loved the feel. Of taking someone's life ... It was amazing. Placing his hand on the woman's chest, he slowly ripped into her body. Cracking her rib. And then he felt it .... the heart. He rapped his hand around it and pulled it out.
Smiling at the body, he was leaning over. Squeezing the heart that lay in his hand. He started to walk away. Looking at the sky as he did.
"What do you think Carolyn? Is this a right step into humanity?"
RATING: R
SUMMARY: i don't know how to writw a summary for this. So read to find out.
DISCLAIMER: i only the OFC and the dead person lol
FEEDBACK: lay it on me
ARCHIVE: if you want it, but tell me so I know where its going
NOTE: this is dark. If you don't like an evil riddick. then its best if you don't read
She rapped her jacket around her, just before she locked the back door to the restaurant. It was a cold night. And it looked like it was getting worse.
"God help. Someone help me. PLEASE!"
She looked around, trying to see where the screaming was coming from. But she couldn't see anything. She stood there for a while, trying to hear something else. But there was nothing. So she lifted the bag of rubbish off the ground, and walked to the dumpster. And thats when she saw it. There was a man ... she thought it was a man. He was huge ... and he was attacking someone.
She stumbled when she heard a sound of cracking. She pressed herself against the wall. Using it to help her walk. 'I have to phone the police ... get help. Just get help.' Her mind was going frantic. She could picture the beast in her mind. Covered in blood. "Shit!" She smacked into something. But that was the least of her worries, there was a feeling of metal pressing against her neck.
"ssshh." The man said, as he slide the metal across her neck. Barely touching her skin.
"This is going to be over so quickly."
"Please ... don't ... I'll do anything. Just don't hurt me ... please."
She whimpered. She could feel the fear run through her. Her whole body was shaking.
"Why not?" He whispered in her ear. She could hear the growl as he spoke. "If I let you go, you'll go to the mercs. And then they'll be after me. Can't have that now, can I?"
He sounded so calm and his voice so smooth. It made her fears even worse.
"I promise ... I won't tell. I promise. Just let me go ... I wanna go home to my family."
Her voice was shaking with every word. And he laughed. Removing the metal from her neck and replacing it with his other arm.
She could feel his hands slowly run down her shoulders. Before he spinned her around.
"You talk to much."
He said, pressing her against the wall. Gripping hold of her jaw.
"We gotta do something about that."
Then ever so gently, with his free hand he pulled out her tongue.
'No god ... NO ... please don't let these happen to me.' Her mind was screaming. The man let go of her jaw, and slide the metal into her mouth. She felt like she was going to gag. She was going to die and there was nothing she could do to stop it. And then she felt it.... the metal was slowly sliding across her tongue.
She could feel the blood pouring down her throat. As he pulled her tongue out of her mouth. Her whole mouth was full of blood. She sunk to her knees. The pain was unbearale.
"What goes well with tongue?"
That was the last thing she heard before everything went black.
He laughed, as he watched her slump to the ground. He bent down next to her, pulling her up by the hair. And as he looked at her face, he pulled his goggles off. Grinning. This was too easy. But the feel .... He loved the feel. Of taking someone's life ... It was amazing. Placing his hand on the woman's chest, he slowly ripped into her body. Cracking her rib. And then he felt it .... the heart. He rapped his hand around it and pulled it out.
Smiling at the body, he was leaning over. Squeezing the heart that lay in his hand. He started to walk away. Looking at the sky as he did.
"What do you think Carolyn? Is this a right step into humanity?"
